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"As a proud Saiyan and our child you are no mere Low-Class Saiyan for the blood of one of our ancestors, one of the greatest of ancient Saiyan warrior champions from Sadala also flows in your veins and you bear all the distinctive marks of her chosen descendant. In time we know you will eventually awaken your unique bloodline but to keep you safe we suppressed your potential and hid your mark as one of the bearers of the [Legendary Supreme Seven Thunderbolts of Power], from the forgotten legends of are people concerning the [Legendary Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan God] so that you could grow up in peace despite looking different from everyone else even if something was to happen to us." he finished solemnly as he let go of his wife's hand and placed it around her waist, the shadow of unshed tears of love and pride for his beloved daughter near the edge of his eyes.
Currently Twinkle was scanning the horizon with his modified sniper gun wand, looking for targets.
"On the thirty-fifth year of the New Verdant Calendar, a faint signal of a long-lost communication channel has been detected by Shayla and Lintmann, two prominent frontier teleporters, while exploring the galaxy near an available portal, at the west-side of Sector 67-11. The two-man team had reported to the headquarters and asked for additional professional assistance. An additional twenty professional intergalactic inspectors were sent over as additional manpower to find the exact location of the signal.
I'm gonna give you this rank because there is only one chapter, I like how It is good luke i gonna see you work in this new world.An is gonna have some gods or is gonna be a normal world.
author is this dropped? pls dont tell me it is
O começo da história foi um pouco confusa, então não entendi algumas coisas. Mas me parece legal e interessante.
This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly)Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution
it's been interesting so far keep it up author
good and engaging interesting characters
Love this author and this story is great so far.
I personally am loving it and quite possibly in the near future this work will become 4/5 in writing and 5 in the rest it uses several resources of narrative connection and character development that are only noticeable in best sellers. But although the writing in particular is still somewhat immature, it has everything to improve and be a great work.
Greetings fellow reader i have put image in character info, and in the comments i put another image their hope you like it.
