Well this is the tenth review. So I figured out to write it down myself.
I started this series with a goal in mind, to have fun and enjoy writing it.
But midway thought an idea popped up my mind; why don't I turn it into a comic?
And so I've done that :D
The comic is now released for free at webtoon. You can check it out if you want.
I apologize for my delay in updating the past period, I was kinda busy with the comic thing.
However as everything is settled then I can resume writing and publishing here with the same schedule I promised; two chapters per day.
Hopefully you'll like the story :)
Ranmaro
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The writing itself is well enough and I love that MC has no morals, he lets his pride get in the way too often though, he is also not reincarnated, even though this novel has a reincarnation tag(or at least there were only indications contrary to the reincarnation tag, and none in favor of it).So it's something for you if you love prideful-evil MCs even if that pride gets in their way, but if you want an intelligent (if socially clueless) MC with no morals then you can try, will likely not like it though.
Decent read but to slow update time in comparison to length of chapters ( really short chaps).
Color me impressed..The story is immersive, the world background is beautifully fleshed out, logical MC, realistic conversation, oh and the reveals... Dem reveals are just awesome, the timing, the build up, the twists..That one chapter at chapter 55 convinced me that the author is truly a big brain.. Props to you author..
I started reading this because I like medical novels. It’s pretty good and I’ll definitely recommend it. The only annoying thing for me is that the MC cannot really stand up for himself and has a low EQ but I can deal with that.
Read through the first 56 chapters, the story was nice & definitely had potential, but the lack of editing (especially in the early chaps) makes it somewhat difficult to get really absorbed into the novel itself. There were also some minor inconsistencies with in game data related things, but I'll put that down to grammar and editing too. Just somewhat sad I didn't really feel hooked enough on the story to want to continue reading after chapter 56 when the paywall hit. Thanks for a decent attempt author ❤ but honestly, please go back through the previous chapters and just run it through Microsoft Word or something just so it's a smoother read for us.
Firstly to begin with the title, it states the thing clearly which is inside, of course that is cultivation. But it exceeded my expectations as the MC isn't a destitute dude who is in dire need to cultivate to gain a reputation as it mostly happens in such books. Secondly what makes it more different is the crafting of MC Zhu Long, who isn't a weakling since the very beginning which is the common cliche of such plotlines, instead he is living well with his other abilities.
Quoting the plotline furthermore, the author did a good job while starting with the tinge of mysterious mark, and the certainties are kept upto the chapters, that I didn't even bother to read the chapter titles, and couldn't keep my eyes off the prose. As to conclude it ISN'T A CLICHE CULTIVATION thing, I've read many books in this genre but there was only till now that I found completely UNIQUE in true sense regarding the list of magical fantasy. This will remain in my library from now as it is different for sure in the huge pile of cultivation.
Lastly criticising about the narration style, I'd like to make a few things before you step over the author with your ire. It happens when you are binge writing that authors couldn't point out their own blunders, I admit that there are a few errors regarding unnecessary switching of the tenses and punctuation but the plotline will keep you hooked badly that readers can close their eyes to such flaws, they won't cause any hindrance to the flow of reading.
I'd like to sum up my review by stating the quality, author has a define style when it comes upto the enhancing and effectiveness of the dialogues, the world is crafted out very beautifully that you can get the whole image of the cliff and the surrounding bushes, along with the other residents. There are heaps of books under cultivation theme but what makes this one different is solely based on the presentation of the MC, his soliloquies, thoughts, relationships, urges and wishes along with the other people who are near him. Most of the authors in this genre fail to touch the depth of the MC, and a reader couldn't get closer in understanding the MC, and questions bearing WHY remains unsettling which drags down the story and results in the failure. As others stated that this book is not comparable to other top ones, I'd honestly say that author will get it to the top soon, as he will improve gradually.
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I love it so much. It made me at the intense moments and sad moments. This Tale of Logic has inspire me to drink water aqua. Thanks
Story is too cliche, the author just cut from several novels like sage monarch and nine dragon cauldron then put them together and made it worse to form this