The characters are boring and bland. The mc instead of leaving group chats or blocking people is legit acting like a masochist and just taking the insults. The FL isn’t bad but not really good either. Overall novel is bland and uninteresting
The worst sign in novel I have read till now. It's a copy paste of past novels ...just done worse....there is no excitement and the techniques he gains are lame and not hyped enough. The things he gains are nerfed for plot and he apparently faces "bottlenecks" which sign in system MCs usually don't. In these types of novels fast cultivation is important as that is the main thing the novel is based around. Grasping this technique is very important and makes all the difference. imo till now "Sign in buddha's palm" has been my favourite in this genre even though I dropped it later on. Thing is it is very difficult to keep the attention of the audience in this premise. Good try by author but it was not executed very well. Hope your next book comes out better and you learn from this experience. :) <3
I found it
I think this is it
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While the idea behind the story is good, it pains me to say that the poor writing quality makes it unenjoyable. There are too many dialogues, but we have no idea about how the character feels, what they were doing, or what's the situation surrounding them. It lacks proper explanation. This work might be more appropriate as a theater script.
Also, as I've mentioned in many of my reviews, proper punctuation is important. Thats what makes a sentence can be easily comprehended.
If the author makes no visible improvement in the future, I'm afraid I can't go on reading this. Sorry.
Updated review on this novel due to the Hiatus:
It's a shame because I really liked this novel, but the author seemed to have gotten what I assume to be writer's block, or perhaps laziness/procrastination.
First the break was only like a 5-day break, saying he'd be back on the Tuesday of 10/15/18, then on that Tuesday he secretly and quietly changed the Tuesday to Thursday, then on Thursday he made another update to say he'd be done by the end of the month of October because of his sisters wedding he had to do work for, and then at the end of October he updated it again to give him another week in November. And now a week into November it just says "I'll definitely be back soon"
I think this all would be fine and all, people need their breaks, but seeing as how you keep changing the date without actually changing your "Update 10/18/2018" hoping that we wouldn't notice you silently changing the date back every so often is kind of a scummy move. If you need a half year break, just say so, but don't keep letting our hopes down by breaking your words and postponing the next chapter little by little each time
This story have potential, it is interesting and prose
The things are well placed characters personalities are defining.
You are doing nice work~~
Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading
Why did you have to choose human which atomically makes me drop the damn story since it’ll be hella boring. You should have never given Demons, Dragons or fairies as a option since it only shows the reader that the author could’ve made a interesting and cool character but instead opted for a human...
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Saw the number of chapter so i wasn't tempted to read but when i gave it a try. It wasnt that bad. Its actually pretty good. And I see it going somewhere If it doesnt deviate
Thank you all for the honest reviews, I really appreciate it.
I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.