Greetings Viewers, Ramble here, I know what youre thinking, why are you commenting on this Novel? Well, I have been told by the Creator to write this review as there will be a collaboration with This Novel and The Novel I'm currently let out of But you'll be seeing it somewhere around November.Toodles!
Good read the script is broken down to finest detail this is a highly recommended.Author please never stop writing.I look forward to finishing this.
The author's other book wasn't half bad so i wonder how did he suddenly manage to write this one out of thin air. I would like to use many adjectives to describe it but just know that its a waste of time.
Translation is fine. Story is written terribly though. Writing quality is literally middle school level. It reads more like an summary of a story than an actual story. Author really needs to learn "show, not tell"
Awesome! Keep it up bro! That was a nice plot you have there! Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ichijoku makes the right decision though ☹️. Sorry for the guy
Finally something different. Great start, seems to be a good quality work, hopefully this gets picked up.
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In the 20 chapters so far the story is enjoyable. It is not an epic masterpiece but a good enough story to pass the time. It is so far fairly well written and I look forward to more chapters.
Great start. Very Funny. Hahaha. Who am I kidding? This is just one more comment so that I can get to 10 comments to get a rating. If you haven't realised yet, this is me, the guy who wrote the novel. Welp.
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Keep it up. ... the story is going great and i hope that you keep writing at this pace.... .Ig you want it as a long term story as per you mentioned. . don't worry I will give you my power stones.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.