Why the FCK was this book chosen...Like please he finds divine arifacts left right and centre.Helps players because they are girls despite being cheated and dumped on.Has 3 factions with the insectiod faction not being in the game at all and then thete is the hidden shifter faction that he is in.
The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!
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A must read for anyone who is tired of silk pants MCs!!! One of the realest, grittiest stories passionately told from a well respected writer. Big fan!!!
amazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.
another trash Chinese novel added to its bunch. there is nothing here but face slapping. these are written by very untalented garbage level authors just to make money by cheating either novice readers or day dreamers. i wish it is possible to give a rating below 1 star.
its a good novel destroyed by a sucky translator, dropped it at chapter 64 because of translation quality is low compared to the first 1 to 62 chapter then it become sucks, its also a paid chapter so why is the translation is bad, for the translator of 1 to 60 thank you for you workand the rest you SUCK and blue fairy your face SUCK YOU
Story after 83 chapters no spoilers - female MC and her army of c*ckolds somehow remain ignorant that she's c*cking them. The moment male MC says the sky is blue, female MC disagrees and is offended and with male MC, then somehow all the 50 c*ckolds in a 1000 miles know that male MC offended for female MC and plan ambushes for male cannon fodder MC. (eye roll) The story is definitely infuriating no to mention the NTR by female MC, and some subtle undertones of NTR for male MC. MC not interested in romance starts it anyway, MC never sharing any taughts on other characters with other characters is also a big turn off, always saying the bare minimum, dude could just release some truths or smthing and release some strongly worded justice, but yet we remain dissapointed by MCs passiveness. All around infuriating.Then the reading - im not sure if translation, chat GTP or the author, but the sentences are a mess, constant jumps between points. In good noves u know when the info dump starts and can skip it - here its a dumpster fire, u skim over a word and the next paragraph no longer makes sense. Making the story is rly awkward to read, reading it feels like something is constantly off, a big mess.
Absolutely one of the best novels I've ever read. I loved every minute of reading, the character design was absolutely impeccable and the same goes for world building and story development. And the grammar don't get me started on the grammar, the grammar was perfect.100/10 would definitely read again.
story is not consistent and it is full of loopholes,and there is another auction system novel some things are directly taken from there ....
interesting
I have read the current available chapters (20) and so far I am enjoying the read. It’s the standard weak to strong trope with a system to aid his development. The system is actually sentient and sounds rather interesting. So far he has a goal, the usual one to be better than everyone else and be recognised, no apparent love interest, though the girl he saved may become one but that is purely speculation at this stage. The idea of the house being his avenue to success is something I haven’t read before but it does appeal, especially when he mentions there is over 40 rooms inside so there is a lot of room to grow in this story.Anyways, it is early days and I would recommend this to readers to support and follow.