Story is good.... don’t drop the story...... because many people started a good story and will drop with **** story.....??????????????????
YOW!!! It's been awhile since I've check my library ? then I noticed you've already passed 100 chapters bro. You have no idea how HAPPY I am for you bro ☺️ I need to step my game up lol ? what's your secret brother ?
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You use too much Onomatopoeia. In one chapter, 3 to 5 are enough. That's the maximum amount. If there are too many, the reader's reading flow will be disrupted.Also, don't combine Onomatopoeia words in a sentence. That's not good writing. Let one Onomatopoeia word itself be on a separate line.Out of 5 chapters, chapter 4 was really uncomfortable to read. The structure is probably something I rarely or never see in other webnovels I've read. I suggest reading other similar webnovels to be able to imitate the writing style and structure.
I often didn't read these kinds of things, but this one caught my attention. The way you describe everything is too captivating. I wondered if this all was real.heheHowever, it was enjoyable to read
I recommend you all starting at (Arial) volume 2 new and improved besides (Jane and Stacey) volume 1. The reason I say this is because each chapter don't have much words in it in volume 1 but it's still fun to read if you want to read it.Originally this was supposed to be about characters in diffrent time and dates in this world. So I’m going to try to focus on one character so to not to confuse the readers and make it easier on myself with all the character developments.
The best novel to read?The concept of science fiction is interesting. What will happened to the Rocky? Seema's character seems so amazing. What will Anna do with Rocky?
He really changed.He really changed.He really changed.He really changed.He changed. I don't know what to say but the personality changed
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I shouldn’t be impatient and should follow the MC determination BUT!This novel need more recognition!Sure, 1 million is a lot but for me, it’s not…