Ting Mei laughed at her pathetic self that didn't want to believe anything anymore.
Sasuke's glaring Sharingan were memorizing every detail of the bridge itself, looking for weak-points and angles of attack. Naruto's fingers were moving nearly involuntarily to summon an army of clones to make anyone regret attacking them. Sakura hurriedly placed an explosive note on the column they were standing on. "Tag set."
I am in absolute love, I just wish they could finally get their moment without being interrupted. I have to fill in the rest of the characters so ahshejsjajaganKdjdhdiwkamsjd
An immersive experience for all ages. My endless hunger for quality content has been duely sated. The gods of XP have bestowed upon us this beautiful literary gift, which shall become a classic, and a testament to humanity's will and achievements.
Each character feels real and the fact that it is a cultivation world but the main character isn't just running around face slapping people makes me so happy. The concept is original and I truly enjoy reading each and every chapter. Occasionally their are parts that the writing feels a bit off, but as the story progresses you see the author does as well.
(not a very proper review, just my thoughts)So far I'm liking the story, the punctuation is sometimes a bit off like there are sometimes runoff sentences and no commas where there should be. And the 'I' is written as 'i' but that's just me being nitpicky.In one of the later chapters, there's a repeating (whywhywhywhywhy, etc) and I feel like there's too much? I had to scroll down for so long ahThe story is good but there's not enough world-building. If there were more then that would be great.Not sure what it meant by using 'half his powers' though?Also when MC dies, he meets this guy asking for help and accepts it? Not sure why he did and is not at least a bit freaked out.There's a chapter with character info on it, but I feel like it spoils the story a little. I would have just put in the characters that were already introduced in the story rather than just say, hey, this is the ML and the MC and the villain, they like this stuff and hate that stuff.Though I hope author-sama updates this :)
what an extraordinary book in my opinion, that's all I can say.and I read this book feels like reading a book full of suspense My House of Horrorexcellent writer, good job (y)
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The author makes the main character hold onto stat points so he can make everything harder and more frustrating for the mc. Literally ruined the entire novel every conflict that he has, could easily been solved by distributing his stat points. It’s just a boring read and an easy opt out by the author.
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