This is a great story with a good plot, to top it all off the translator is doing a great job with the translation. I did not notice any area of writing that needed more clarification or seeming awkward. The story development is going in an interesting direction and character design and world building is also done very well. This is an urban novel done decently. Look at tags, if you like them, then go ahead and read it.
A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
So far, I like the novel. Although some cliche villains, I like the MC character and his way of dealing with enemies. Also, I like that even when simple minded. The MC doesn't do naive or dumb things like other novel "smart" mcs. Furthermore, his brother and new friend don't depend/leech on the mc extremely(at 100ch)
I had a nicely criticizing review before you deleted it. Censorship at its finest. I seriously dont know why you even bother, if it’s to save “face” or whatever, doesn’t this make it worse? I’ve lost almost all respect I once had for you because of this cr*p your pulling. It’s like you want us to resent you Webnovels. If a novel is bad, let us say it is bad, and if a novel is good, let us say it is good. Why do you need to rig the reviews?
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mc has about as much personality and intelligence as a tree stump..... ...................... ...
I'm going to give a really quick summary of my review. the author takes out what is arguably the only good point in the story for over half of it and expects people to continue to enjoy. you'll understand what I mean once you get to the higher world levelsthe first Arc as I would call it which is the lower world cultivation is pretty good. It's relatively well done not many mistakes the tad bit of sexism which is normal in these novels but there isn't much nationalism if any at all. my problem is when we get to the higher world and our main character gets separated from his disciples which is whatever. my problem though is how hard the author tries to force it so that the main character can't meet up with which is honestly the most interesting part of the story is group of disciples. anywhere from being way too far to have soul guidance work or just straight up ignoring the main characters summons even though they're his disciples. or the main character being too much of a coward to go help out his disciple who was being captured by someone way weaker than the main character. it'd be fine if it only went on for like 10 chapters or so but it's already been over 100 chapters of the author coming up with every excuse imaginable on why the main character can't see his disciples. and that would be fine if that wasn't what made the story interesting. the main characters pretty two-dimensional he doesn't have much development and it's reasonable it's explained why early on and his personality is pretty on set. you know what you're getting from the main character and he doesn't deviate from it. the disciples are pretty interesting they come up with a lot of the comedy in the story and they make it interesting to read. getting rid of them for over what is currently half of the story is ridiculous. by the way I'm up to chapter 400 basically so pretty close to the end and he still hasn't met up with his disciples. usually I would just keep reading some already here at the end but the chapters are a bit too long to make me want to finish reading this when there's over 100 plus chapters still and I see no way it can end so soon and I also see no reason why he can't meet up with his disciples. another one of my pet peeves with this novel is how much the author makes what is supposed to be a righteous sect evil. I understand the human heart isn't true most of the time. however when you're supposed to be a Buddha the only way you should be able to cultivate that type of Mantra would be if you have a heart of goodness a heart of gold to say, if you are truly able to be a good person at least that's usually how these stories go and how it looks like this story goes. so why is it that every person in the Buddhist sect is a horrendous person who likes to either torture people for fun or doesn't mind killing Innocents because they were in the way. I understand how these novels work most of the time but it's really drawing a blank here when the author tries so hard to make almost all of them evil except for a very few portion.
This is one of my absolute favorites. Sad that it left WW but I actually like webnovel a LOT! it even has a library and stuf flike that amazing.The app is nice as well but back to the review!Translation Quality: Top Notch what do you expect?Update Stable: Damn he is like on steroids... fun aside it is really really stableStory Development: The Story itself is well written and has a really nice pace to it. Nothing to add or substract. 4/5 because at some points it does feel a bit streched but that is so rare.Char development: Amazing I loved every second of it till now.World background: Your Standart WebNovel Martial arts world a perfect 5 nothing wrong.
don't ever read from this author, he's playing with us, readers.he has 4 novels till now, none of them are completed, left in between. he always fails to think of what to write, this starts a new novel altogether. stop reading from this mofo.there are many villain novels out there, read them.
At first glance, this seems very similar to "Scholar's Advanced Technological System" which I was enjoying a great deal until the Author started America and Trump-bashing, at which point I dropped the story. Anyway, this protagonist is blessed with an ability that lets him instantly quantify anything that he comes across. It is less versatile than the system possessed by "The Scholar," but at least he doesn't have to complete missions and listen to a snarky system try to undercut his sense of self-esteem every which way.
I wanttttttt this game instead of Pokemon Go.I want that Lucky cat to change my hell life to lucky life..muhahaha..different from other novels,sometimes u need diff things to spice of the life~seriously read this~
Quite a good story, development at a good pace and if u don’t like ecchi or harem kind of stories don’t even waste ur time writing a review.