Good oneAlthough the story is sometimes quite confusing, It has a lot of potential. It's the very first one that I would purchase privileged chapter on, and I'm now broke with coins :')
Overall it's an extremely enjoyable story, with a good concept, interesting characters, and great story development, however the writing quality makes it so difficult to read. Just one proofreader could fix the entire problem, but with how the writing is currently I don't think anyone can enjoy the good qualities of this story to their fullest.
A very good novel, sadly it's on hiatus. I am glad the greedy privilege wall was removed, since it was too expensive to be worth it. Aside from that, it's worth reading, and worth paying for under a reasonable price tag.
I believe the author is trying to create abig world where humans and multiple species might come together or it can also something like tang clan. i am anticipating how the development will take place since a small world would require much better details and a large world would require much larger description.Anyway, the development is quite good, and i feel that the author might be able top do justice to the character.
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
the grammar is disgustingly bad. the story is somehow worse. i wouldn't mind if the grammar was just bad, but it has reached an extent where I as a reader, am forced to decipher the meaning every sentence. This is not reading, this is torture.
Author of this novel . Unlike others I won't pretend that my work is a 5/5 , but I think the good point of this novel will be the world background as I will take multiple old myths and reincorporate them inside the game to make the story really interesting ( Like Fate for those who knows ) .The bad point of this novel is obviously the writing quality , although I'm not terrible , it's obvious that this novel is far from perfect in this category .
The story is funny and interesting at the same time better than other books I read so far all I can say is that its a good story and I highly recommend it!
Loved the premise. Strong start. The prologue is dark and foreboding. Excited for what is to come. Five stars for now. Will make a follow up review after more chapters arrive...
The Best Cultivation Novel Out there, except for the stupid action at the beginning of the novel which is negligible. Just hope that he doesn't chase MIL F around, just go for pure maiden
this the first webnovel I read and I simply love it .
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