Leonardo: *With a stoic face* Yes
Definitely one of my favorite books now.
i know you can do better , wish you good luck on your novel
The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month.The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.
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A few mistakes here and there but overall I like the character design, story development. I hope this continues and the quality so far does not diminish.
I have to say, I like the writing style and the story development and character building, is isn't too slow or too fast it moves with the perfect pace and keeps us wondering what will happen next!! Keep it up author! Looking forward to much more updates!
The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!
the start screams beginner writerso you should fix thatand also I recommend talking about a topic for longer than:1chpt back in time2chpt meeting......3chpt attending.....4chpt reaching .......5chpt meeting betrayer6chpt revenge7chpt going back
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I know your thinking why I only rated this novel 1 ?It is because I find the synopsis catchy and will start to read it so I'll comeback after reading the existing chapters and chang this review. ?
This is a good read, it's exciting in every chapter. Definitely, an interesting story to check out especially when you're into evolution tropes.