Salvatore_77119p
Alibaba version of Chaos Heir.
Really great story. It not only kept me fully immersed in the plot, but also somehow found a way to slowly flesh out the characters. Well done author, just one big issue: There is too few chapters!
Mandatory 5 star review. It's my first time writing a story and I hope you like it. Please share with friends if you like it. ;););););););)
Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.Easily the best novel out of all the one's currently in their trial period. I really hope this gets picked up.
The author's writing has improved a lot from the past. Also the plot changed from the original novel, so even if you were a fan of that you should read this one.This is a present for the author.
If you were ever a fan of summoner novels and wanted to read a good one at that , then you have reached your destination! The MC is incredibly lucky as a lot of fortuitous things happen to him inside the game . He himself admits it in the story at one point in time . This however gives him dangerous quests to compensate for the luck he received. There are dubgeons where he almost died. And dying surely has a penalty attached to it in games after crossing a certain level and this one is no exception. Most of all the mc is not arrogant and is level headed and simply doesn't look for trouble . He initially wanted to be a summoner for recreational purposes as summoner is not a popular class in the game but due to the events he goes through in the game, he increases his ambitions to reach a higher level . I think this change was partially due to the quests he received. He is not so lucky in real life btw ... Either way , the novel is surely a joyful read! So show the author some love !
So far im really enjoying this, keep up the good work, love both the story and premise just maybe clean up the "status" and especially "quest" screens a bit
Read till 33 chapters. Novel has all the cliches, propaganda and bad writing of other novels. Did I say propaganda? Because this novel made me hate China. Novel has all the bad things about other Chinese novels, none of the good things, like humour, logic(somewhat), plot, etc. I can’t even stand 33 chapters, but 9500 chapters? No thanks. I don’t want my IQ to reach negative numbers.
Did the translation stop again? It's getting ridiculous. One of the best wuxia webnovel isn't getting the attention it deserves! I would use machine translation, but that won't do this story justice.
Definitely the type of novel I would read.
Grammar has little to no errors. Prose and narration are fluid, descriptions are conveyed with intricate details. Dialogue is good also. Nothing much I could really critique. Definitely one of the gems here at WN. Keep up the good work.
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This story is pretty food but the updating doled and how short the chapters are makes it eh how do I put this aggravating buy everything else is pretty good
