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Okay. The writing is good way better than the previous standard of trash set by the previous trial reads. It's a beast taming/summoning ish novel where the mc has his chea t. He's not an brain damaged idiot with an inflated sense of justice, some or an annoying character....yet. Also hints of nationalism which in Chinese novels modern setting is basically a packaged deal with racism. It hasn't happened yet (racism) and the nationalism is toned down for now but my experience says it's inevitable. Hopefully I'm wrong otherwise this good novel will be dropped ruined by nationalism and racism.
The story starts out solid. Good System and kind of unique. But then in chapter 18/19 the authors split personality comes out to sabotage it all, writing the dumbest garbage one could imagine. Hopefully this will not waste a voting spot. Thanks! [img=recommend]
._________________. each chapter I read from this book cost me 100 million brain of my brain cells, I afraid that if I read more I will lose the ability to speak and think properly.
Good character development. Good writing quality. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
good potential, continue (even if I hope women would have more than just "cooking")[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update]
Great work Author love this book even though I haven't finished reading all the chapters keep writing and never stop .......
The concept is very interesting and the translation is also excellent.
However the story itself is a little dubious.... frankly, if I had his power I wouldn't be so worried about finding a job, I will spend my time in casinos and make a fortune! Not study for tests in university...
Quite interesting, but the depiction of the characters in my opinion is quite lacking. Stay positive...................................................................
Filling up the minimum letter count so that I can shamelessly review my own novel as a masterpiece.
Idea of the story is intriguing but the English really diminishes the quality significantly. What's more, there's way too much dialogue and the fact that exposition is not used to describe what is going on also makes it a pain to read.If your character is tired, then describe how he is tired, not say "*in a tired voice*" and be done with it, that's just lazy and unprofessional.There's also no indication of who is speaking most of the time so you're left wondering who is talking and the lack of exposition also makes the characters look boring. I'm here to read a story, not to uncover the mysteries of what you're writing. If I have to spend extra effort to understand what you're writing, then I might as well not read it.