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guyzz do give this story a chance , take it from me you won't be disappointed ...it's wonderfully written and the story plot is just fabulous ...i am already hooked to it ...so trust me and dive in ???
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Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
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The plot is quite unique. The description of the environment shows the research done by the writer. The character's emotions are also well written.Keep Going!!!
Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
Do not put any money into this. After charging for chapters the writing style changes completely. The gender pronouns are fixed, it is now a disjointed mess. Suddenly you are expected to follow a bunch of people's perspectives and the story is lost fast. After the paywall the story you paid for is gone replaced by a hot mess. If you want a fun story of a mage with his quirky maids, then do not read this.A ton of overly complicated drama happens after a girl is captured that ruins it for no reason.It had potential and I will state that if it was not rushed the way it is now. It could be good; however, they did not do that. At this point from the point the princess enters the story it needs a ton of work. If it gets the work needed it could be great.
Hi,This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Kingdom's Bloodline”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyTynan
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Loving it so far looking forward to more!! when are the updates going to be? and I love how the character is your typical good guy! really recommend this!
The writing quality is really great and the action is well written. I'm excited to see what kind of character the MC creates next! Also, the world building is fleshed out really well. Great work!
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