The Ambitious Girl and the 'Out-of-this-world' Boy

This is one of the best book I have ever read and I highly recommend this to those who are finding good book and story. There are lots of errors though when it comes to names and other stuffs but over all the story is fascinating. Just hoping that the ending is not the common ones.

This novel has one of the most hypocritical MCs. He sometimes spares his foes saying he couldn’t be bothered with them in arrogant ways which is supposedly cool according to author...and he acts humble to immortals in the painting who also praise him to be MATURE....he is nothing without the gifts he is born with and the painting yet acts almighty.....I have only read until 250 chapters in which almost all the arcs revloce around him helping girls who fall in love with him but he soon distances himself afterwards..I am not saying that he should take every girl he encounters but it’s like author introduces girls to show MCs awesomeness..Every battle is epic and is should be written in history..all the spectator are like ‘this move hasn’t been seen in centuries’, ‘he is so young’ etc...there is no character design as everything he does is hypocritical and it annoys me how the author tries to make the hypocritical moves as something cool and grand every character is a pathetic attempt to show-off MCs greatness....Anyway I do not recommend this book to people who are already fed up with repetitive plots but it is a good choice for people who like wish-fullfillment novels

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im split on this novel. the idea is good, the grammar is good, it is original well as original as system novel get but the execution not so much.the amount of chapters i skipped was a lot, 20-30 and the issue is that i could just seamlessly jump back in and i missed nothing.that is a major issue. it means the pacing of your story is crap and/or you are too descriptive on useless content. i wouldnt know i havent read it.this story feels like you read to the first taunt quest(ch15ish which can count as the prologue) and then jump to chapter 45 for the story to start. you need to make sure not to waste too many chapters on one event, you wasted way too  many chapters on that especially when the main character isnt even doing anything, the mc itself is fine.

I really would like to read more after chapter 30. Something ominous seems to be lurking in the background. Vivshi is gonna go through revolution.

the story itself is fine although the world background needs work but the translation quality is just not acceptable for a paid book.if it was a free book i wouldn't complain but if i'm paying to read a book, i expect the grammar to be stellar.just consider how much you actually spend, 1$ for 4 chapters, thats about 28$ just for the currently available chapters. 25$ for 100 chapters that'll be hundreds of dollars for a subpar translation thats sometimes difficult to make sense of, and that is disregarding the actual quality of the book itself.for reference the complete harry potter book series will cost you 70$ for printed books.