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My heart just might explode!
Three star for a start. This sounds interesting so I'll give this story a chance.Be back again after I read some chapters for a real review.
Protect? So he wouldn't be killed? [A familiar contract?] Albusflores asked. He was tired all he wanted was to sleep, his head was spinning around. The betrayal, the need to let someone know, the need to save his life, all of those started to feel secondary to getting a bit of sleep. Just a minute of sleep.
Rin lowered her gaze and looked at the slender figure covered in bloodstains lying weakly on the bed. She could not stop the frown growing on her lips nor the crease in her brows upon staring at him.
I love it. 5/5, hope this will help you keep writing.Now I just need to write 140 characters.Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato. Potato.
if you like unscientific beast taming, you gonna love this.have similarity but not full Copycat,more like the author probably also fans of unscientific beast taming and took reference from the book. because i found hidden clue here and there that only people who read unscientific beast taming gonna understand (based on my own assumption lol)
First read this on scribble hub via Novel updates new stories boxes , lol.Seems like a fairly decent and intriguing story to me.Pleased that there are more chapters here than on scribble hub.
yuri? I hope not. . ... .. .......
This book is full of emotions. I can tell the author put a lot of thought into the characters personalities. And if you like fantasy, this world is very original. The descriptions are amazing, and Rowan is very likable MC. It takes a lot for me to get so attached right away, but I just love him. Don't get me started on how hot Wren is.
Overall, this is a highly entertaining novel with interesting plotlines and unexpected twists—though not the mind-boggling kind, they’re still very enjoyable. The pacing is solid, and the storytelling keeps you engaged throughout.One aspect I find less appealing, however, is the author’s tendency to keep villains alive for potential future use. While the villains themselves are exceptionally well-written and compelling, I personally have a strong aversion to the recurring villain trope. It’s something I’ve seen done poorly in many other books, and it’s made me wary of it, even when executed well. In fact, I dropped another book by this same author a year ago for the same reason.That said, this is more a personal bias than a flaw in the writing. The author’s skill is undeniable—his world-building, character work, and pacing are top-notch. I’ve truly enjoyed his works and have a lot of respect for his ability to craft such immersive and engaging stories.I’ll also add a fair warning: the main character is brutal. Not quite in a blood-curdling, horror sense, but definitely violent enough to make even readers familiar with darker books pause and go, “Damn.” It fits the tone of the story well, though, and adds to the MC’s impact.If you don’t mind a little blood, vengeance, and villains that refuse to stay dead, you’re in for a gripping ride.
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There's a symbolism running through these chapters that I can't stop thinking about, and it all comes back to water and temperature. Purple Sorrow Lake froze when Mu Shuiqi took something from it. The text explains it practically—"Remove what was its, and it sealed itself in ice—barring entry and exit to prevent further loss." But read symbolically, the lake is reacting to separation. It's the emotional landscape of the Mystic Realm manifesting physically. When someone who belongs there leaves, the world itself closes off. And then there's the snow. Bingyou is "born of glaciers" and "has always loved snow." Snow is his element—cold, distant, beautiful, untouchable. But Mu Shuiqi loves it too now. "Because of love, even its shadows are dear." She's adopting his element, finding warmth in what was always cold to her. The snow becomes a shared language between them. The osmanthus cakes are another symbol I keep coming back to. Bingyou ate all of Mu Shuiqi's previous osmanthus cakes without saying anything. He never refused her offerings, never acknowledged how much he enjoyed them. But Yi Yao points it out: "Last time, all the osmanthus cakes you brought were eaten by Lord Ying. What do you think—doesn't that prove he likes them?" The cakes represent Mu Shuiqi's attempts to connect, to give something small and sweet to someone who lives in ice and silence. And he accepts them every time, even when he can't find words for it. The Sacred Snow Mountain appearing only when snow falls with moonlight—or during a sunshower—this is the story's central metaphor for connection between worlds. Two opposite conditions must align for the bridge to form. Just like Bingyou and Mu Shuiqi: he's ice, she's warmth. He's the Burial Grounds, she's the living world. The mountain only appears when their worlds briefly overlap. And Luoying—goddess of flowers and plants, associated with fragrance and beauty—represents everything Bingyou could have if he stayed in his element. She's the appropriate match, the divine immortal who belongs with the Lord of the Burial Grounds. But she's not what he wants. She's the symbolic foil to Mu Shuiqi: cultivated beauty versus spontaneous joy, eternal perfection versus messy humanity.
