Like the way the story is writing, t e language is beautifully used but in terms of presentation it look a little clusteredAfterall it's a good story with great promises
I really like your novel... ♥♥♥♥♥(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
Can u guys please vote for the novel so that they will pick it up and continue translating thank you. .......................................................
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ? if you open fro that you can message the expert to thank better on Discord @Franklusi0805 and then tell them i commend for you?
quite entertaining.....................................................................................................................................
Excellent work here ??.. keep it up Stonestar ?..next chapter please ?
I like these kinds of slow day to day life stories this one looks promising
At such tragic sight, Gael roared in fury, from the depths of her soul. She rushed onto the monster, shooting her plasma-bolt while running. Aided by her exo-skeleton, She then leapt a great deal-well above the monster's height, and swung her axe straight down to the head so as to split it in half. The beast managed to step backward and evaded the blow, just a moment before the axe would cleave its head off. Nevertheless, this had succeeded in intimidating the monster. Still hostile though, it was now beginning to show some hesitation whenever it wished to assault its opponents. The remaining warriors surrounded it, and then pushed it further to the corner so that it would never be able to escape the scene. So long as the warriors saw it, the tide of battle was turning to their favor. Aelthred and his entire squad were bound to be here in any minute, and after that, it was only a matter of time the monster would meet its tragic end upon this world.
"What? but how?" I asked confusely.
"Okay Doctor."
I get headcache, my head ... my head is spining and what i seing is just a colorfull thing, red, blue, pink, green, it's all what I saw. And ... something weird happen.
"No one is her-" but before Croc could finish he got launched away into a tree in the far back of the group.