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Dear author post this novel on the fanfiction side. You may have to add a new book as a fanfic but it's worth it. Readers rarely check the the novels section when they think of fanfics. So please re- release the chapters. Hope to see you soon.
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing. Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errorsStability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.Character Design: Best part of the story.World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me. So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
I'll be honest. From the first time I read the ROTSSG I like it very much but when its next chapters being repeated scene,its getting boring. If you really read it carefully you'll know what I mean. So i hope don't always rely on the novel also make your own unique scene. Hehehe. Don't be offended. And thank you hope you continue this novel.
I like this novel, and hope the author just drop it like others. In the following hope the character of the mc get better and being able define himself his own authority and exerce more control over his ability to focus on what he need and discern what he don't. ??????????????????
So heres my review. I think that this book is great and has a lot of potential. The writer is new and I do feel that the chapters are a bit small but that can improve with time. Now the mc is interesting and seems smart which is all I ask for in a novel nowdays so this is a plus. The other characters so far are okay but can get better with more descriptions and a bit of development.This story is good but it can be great if its fleshed out more. Its just that it is bit too fast paced for my liking and I would liked it if the beginning of the novel was slower paced. If it was done slowly, this novel would be as good as reverend insanity.All in all, this is good book with a lot of potential and I hope for its success.
The story is good so far.. Writing Quality: There isn't much to complain about. Character Design: It's okay imoWorld Background: It's good also. Update Stability: 1 chapter a day. Story Development: Going at a good pace currently, again imo My Rating: 4 stars, but I'll give the author a 4.6 stars rating to encourage him. Recommendation: I'll advise you read it as it is a great story imo. Also if the first chapters are disappointing to you, I suggest you read till about chapter 40 before you decide if you want to drop it. The first chapters aren't really that good imo, but the book started getting better for me at about chapter 30 or so. Also there are some places I personally feel the author didn't execute properly, but since he's new, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. If you check my write up you'll see I put imo in most of the places because they are my opinions. My thoughts are different from what you'll think about the book. Read it... Only then will you know if it's good.
It's entertaining enough to keep my attention. That's all the matters to me. I like these types, where the MC has to accept disciples. There isn't enough to really criticize, the grammar and spelling is fine. Maybe someone could argue you should've expanded on when and how the actual MC took over the body of his predecessor? It just jumped straight into the action, but I actually prefer this over some long info dump at the beginning. Anyways, I look forward to the more.
I cant believe its finished I loved the book it was amazing and Full of excitment, I loved the characters,Well done on completeing you book
The story is interesting??? and pls when will the next chapter be out. I want to know what transpire between Elisabeth and Alu at the end
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