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Not my cup of tea since I’ve already matured from the naïveté of these type of novels. I doubt this will be chosen.
There’s nothing really interesting about this, just feels like another replica of the same degenerative novels that doesn’t specify on a true reality, even if it’s fiction. Don’t bullshit me, just read My Extraordinary Achievements, for a “better” version of this novel.
something new to read, a very different genre, there was no novel of this kind yet out there, very refreshing, i like it a lot, i recommend for you guys to give it a try at list. you may really enjoy the novel, not like the others
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The prologue took my ducking breath away! Seems like writing in present does have its perks, as it really gave the feeling of 'urgency' writing in past tense doesn't have. As for the idea, isn't it conpletely fresh? Don't you guys want to see where this is going to go? So anyway, thumbs up to the author. I hope you continue writing this novel.
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It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks.
But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.
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The sci-fi feels hit me from the first chapter. This one amazing story that you are writing. The pacing is excellent and since the plot keeps on moving the reader is forced to read further. However what intrigued me the most was your unique style of writing. You are doing an amazing job, keep it up
I find it interesting that the man was kidnapped by a business women and not the other way around... which is cliché and the usual thing that happens in stories!!!
Great way to catch the attention of readers. I love it
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I liked this book a lot. The concept is good and for a few days I was wanting to read a book like this. There was no grammatical errors and the story line was good. I am gonna read this book more and even recommend it to others. Hats
