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Honnestly I love reading BL strories, so when I saw this one, I directly went to read it. It's well written and easy to follow. To put it simply, I'm happy to see a good BL on Qidian. I thank the author, and I look forward to the next chapter.
[Grammar] is near flawless 10/10=(I understand the language, and can read it perfectly. )
[Stability] is good 10/10= (i can bear the wait without being driven MAD.)
[Story Development] has me hooked 10/10= (Not too slow, not too fast.)
[Character Design] is 10/10=( I CAN TELL WHAT PEOPLE LOOK LIKE! YASS!!!)
[World Background] is 9/10= (It's good, and I like it very much BUT, I would like a little more info on what is going on in the world.)
In other words; you get a big shiny gold star~
Lol. I love berries. If i could find a berried room i would hope it was raspberry. Strawberries are also a good choice. No, not strawberries, elderberries. Not elderberries either, black...no blueberries. Nvm. Raspberries are still the best. Sorry for making fun of your berried room. I will give this a read here shortly.
this novel is very good, in my opinion butone this I don't like tho is it's too drawn out than necessary. the mc will be talking about the same thing for like 2-3 chapters it's kinda infuriating to me but overall it's very good give it a try guys
I think it’s good. It’s about a kid who pops pills on the daily and has trouble making friends.
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great story,the bad things that I think should be improve in the story is the mc intelligence, not a smart in not to stupid mc but sometime mc don't think enough or analysis more in certain situation so more failure hope it get better in the way the story progress and my personal problem is now he got a guide and there interaction in mc being dumb and I hate that, as a reader I want the mc to be smarter or use some thinking when he is talking to other people.
I’ve read enough to qualify for a review.
So far, the protagonist seems stupid and oblivious to the world he literally has more experience in than any other being alive!
Also, the characters seem like extras. Reading a story should make you believe that character is real, but it seems to me like they are only there to make the protagonist seem cooler/badass.
Additionally, the plot is a bit . . . stupid. The protagonist makes dumb decisions and the plot seems suited in his favor. Fights happen just because, and the author keeps forgetting they’re in a school.
The protagonist based high school off of an anime, which is subordinate recommended. It’s silly in my opinion.
The writing is sluggish and dull, and it seems as if it’s being rushed through.
Overall, the only time I’d recommend this is if you like dumb characters and world building, or dumb plots that revolve around the character.
Woah!!! What a wonderful story! How can a Human being even write such a story... NO! This is Art! Yes, It is an Art and a Masterpiece at that!
I don't know who wrote this, but I just wanna say, you've outdone yourself!
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(I know I am shameless ~( ̄▽ ̄)~*)
This is an amazing novel. I'll support the author and recommend the readers to read this work.
Keep writing and updating with this same spirit. ALL THE BEST
