pls fix the synopsis it's very messy not very helpful in telling about the story
Alright theres only a few chapters and its still the early stages, but there are some good things to note about the novel:
1)The background the author created for Shi Tian and Sheng Lan was not an info dump like most stories,it fitted in naturally with the narrative of the first chapter although it was a brief mention.
2)The imagery is quite vivid even from the short descriptions which is more prefferable than long descriptions that simply look like bulky text,The environment and world can be visualized quite clearly.
3)The MC thus far shows rational and calm thinking, definitely more likeable than some wn standard brainless MC, and he exudes a an appreciative sense of maturity. It fits with the passive skill he is given.
4)The author is just getting started, there is so much more to explore and i am thrilled to see how mysteries will unravel and the origins of the Great Disaster, The author has dropped subtle points as the event occurred, so i look forward to seeing how some truths will unfold
5)There is much for the MC to develop and grow and i can't help but anticipate the next moves and turns, the novel definitely deserves a read. BEST OF LUCK.
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I love the few chapters that are out right now. The novel has great pacing, and I love the content. Keep up the great work! I honestly would love to get more chapters faster, but I understand you can't rush this, so I will be waiting (im)patiently for more.I will update my review as more chapters come out!
200 chapters so far. The world is great and I see the possibilities but the magic system is a empty shell and the characters have not evolved since chapter 50. Dropping here I think
I like the story as I'm not bored with any of the characters. I do like the FL train of thought and how she knows herself and what she is about. The thing about it is that as the story progresses, things do not not always work the way she or maybe some readers want. I have no opinion of the ML who was faintly introduced in the story in a subtle manner. As long as the story remains interesting and funny this book will remain in my library. Looking forward to reading more chapters. Take care.
ok i gave it 5 stars on all just dont drop it author san.plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspslspslssplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls pls.dont.drop.it
In my opinion this is great. The only thing I do not like about the story is that sometimes it seems like the MC has plot armor. (when he was a leech)
This book has a interesting twist and turn from bad to good and good to great with a cool way to get something that was missing/taken for years.
I thought it would be good, but the plot is too forced. The characters do unrealistically and uncharacteristically stupid things just so "coincidences" can happen and plot can move forward.
First of all, WN recommended this, so I just skimmed through within 15 mins.First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.
This is somewhat unreadable with the westernized names.. they don't fit in this xuanhuan beast story at all..........................................
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