[Time is ticking, you can't spend all day depressed. You need to stop and think things through. For example you've not finished going through the info in your head. Even Derek went through everything.]
Suddenly a concrete wall in front of them rose up. The rising was swift.
I was watching when someone came in so it caught me off guard that leads me in responding awkwardly, as if was caught on act for doing something wrong when in reality I'm not because i'm just merely watching.
What happened…!?
I disagree with the other reviewers. First, it doesn't have any world-building at all. This post apocalyptic world is simply ripped off from games and other post-apocalyptic/scifi stories. Second, it's not even fun as a light read because you'll probably just skim over several paragraphs of pointless conversations or descriptions that are tedious and condescending. It's as if the author thinks the reader is so incredibly stupid, and has no imagination that they needed to explicitly describe things, events or every single irrelevant action such as closing a door in the story. I seriously could not understand why people like this stupid novel. But then again, stupid people read stupid things. There is so much racist/supremacist undertone in this novel that serves nothing more than self-gratifying fantasies the author has. I just have to wonder if the author was educated at all, or have ever experienced socializing with people from another race/country. There was a lot of narrow-minded thinking and generalization in this novel that I personally do not find acceptable at all. I personally didn't find any fulfilment or satisfaction at all in reading the chapters. The conversations feel clunky/unnatural, the pace was tedious, and everything that's happening feel as if they are inconsequential in the end (like it didn't matter anyway if this and that happened, filler chapters). Because all it amounts to is just to prolong the story. It is garbage/trash read. Something you read in the toilet just to pass the time. It doesn't make you think or even imagine. It's formula is to intrigue the reader, and sandwich useless, unnecessary things between that and the story progress. Seriously, it's as if the author just writes all the crap he/she can come up with just to stall the progress of the plot.
This is still a relatively new story but I’ve been genuinely enjoying it so far. I’m excited to see where it goes. The power system is super interesting and it follows an academy style setting, which I am a fan of.
Hello you, yes you, the lost and curious readers who have stumbled or been guided here. This is my third novel and entree to WSA2022, so I welcome and thank all for the support this novel can get. This isn’t an official review of my novel so just treat it as a Q&A area. I’ll do my best to answer all of your questions (without spoilers)?
The first few chapters that I've read was really engaging, I love the start of the book and the character design is awesome
overall, this story is an intriguing one, the writing is top notch although, still needs a bit of improvement, still it's a wonderful book . Good job author!?
THIS IS SO GOOOOD
I've reached until chapter 95 and I can say that this one is a hidden gem. you come close to a typical japanese light novel. the mc is better than most novels out there, there are quite similarities to omniscient reader where there is the isekaied guy, the regressor, the hero and whatnot, the romance part is ok, can you also add more character description. so overall the novel is not bad but i wish you update more chapters and add more interaction scenes with the champions like teemo jumping and hopping around, I hope you can also add the new released champion and skinsP.S. I would love to see a scene where he fused with viego and please don't drop this novel
very good........................ ......