One of my favorite story. This writing isn't that good in the first chapters but it became much better later. All the characters have something and harem members didn't stop being interesting once they join it. In fact some (like the recent aquarian princess) begin to have a development only after joining the harem. There is no characters forgotten (exept Wagyu maybe) and we can see that the world is big and hide some secrets. Highly recommended.
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This chapter the tycoon almost had me in tears. The intricate details about your mother was phenomenal. Your wife seems amazing in the book as well! I enjoyed this chapter. I’m ready for chapter 5 :). I wonder who the little girl is??????
Listen I've been here for a while and I can definitely say this is worth the read. The author has made great improvements in his writing and is definitely dedicated so come a long for the ride.
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Only 6 chapters so far but I know it's gonna be a GEM. It was the cliche transmigration into a villain and making the protagonist fall for him. However, I could feel that the direction of the story would be different from the rest. I'll wait and see.
it was an okay story till chapter 11 when i got to chapter 11 i couldn't even tell what the **** was going on anymore and thats pretty bad for a novel
I have read the first five chapters and I've got to say, it's the most unique realistic story out here in my opinion. Most of the stories are are romance but this story is seemingly taking things beyond. I was hooked in this story from the start. Reyansh is an extremely likeable protagonist and for someone who had mental issues, I can understand him a lot as well. Those inner monologues add a lot of depth of his character as well!Aryan, though, looks scum. I find him a lot interesting as well! I want to know more about him!My second favourite thing in the story so far is the amazing use of symbolism. In Chapter 2, the butterfly symbolism to symbolize Reyansh's future growth was beautifully written and in Chapter 4, the use of Anemone flower to symbolize (maybe) Vansh saving him from hopelessness or maybe some kind of anticipation regarding the two characters? He is my second favourite character so far and I really can't wait to read more!
As the author ill have to give myself a fair critique point of view because i know my flaws and some might see the Glitches in the story line, Alex’s background ignored and further more like those but pls Just have patience as all your observations are more than welcomed .
Thought it was something, but was disappointing. Nothing interesting, even though i have only read a few chapters, it was disappointing enough.
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Translation kinda sucks, but oh well. Story is pretty enjoyable, and it’s fun to read lots of cliches when you are bored. Really hope they expand more on this world though.