The story has a nice premise, the main character is well established and relatable. There are a few flow issues, especially with the internal dialogues, but if you push through the book becomes quite interesting.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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I like the different ways you have made your story. I like reading rencarnated book and this one is definitely differ twist, in a good way, we'll done author.
The premise of this book has some excellent potential already with the mixing of different genres.
Although, as someone who doesn't know much outside of the apocalyptic genre I could use a little more background information on the different Realms and the sects. Just a small description for someone who is getting into this genre for the first time.
Nonetheless the author still managed to get me hooked! I would highly recommend this book to anyone who is looking for something new and exciting to read!
Well done author!
AwEsome book, I miss it more and more everyday. Hopefully the author comes back soon! You wont regret reading this, top tier character development and story progression. Also plenty of flace slapping and laughs!
It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.
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Good storyline the plot flows continuously to the next chapter. Good character development that emphasises the protagonist personality so well. A good read.
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another disappointing novel by jks manga it looks like you have lost your touch with how bad you novels MC characters are being created ...I have to say except from dragon system the rest have not been up to the task maybe you should try stand up comedy bro
It’s not really that good tbh. The idea is that he gets a system thaf lets him buy guns and genetic modifications in exchange for gold. It’s not that amazing of an idea and he even tells a family dozens of times stronger than his about his items and somehow doesnt get totured for info?
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