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The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha
In all honesty I didn't read enough chapters to give this kind of score.
But I've got to say this novel has a lot of potential, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but at the same time every novel that you will read will have these small grammar mistakes so it's alright.
the author makes sure to update this novel frequently giving us a lot of chapters.
as a said before I didn't read enough chapters yet, so I don't know if the story development is good or not, but at the first couple of chapters the story does progress in a nice and easy way helping the reader understand a bit about the history of the characters but not revealing too much.
the character Design is very good as all of main characters in the beginning are described well and are talked about in an interesting manner.
the world background is also very good at the first chapters from ancient times to current time.
I'm going to continue reading this and give a better review with better details - I believe that if you have free time you should read this, the story is already very interesting in the first chapters.
author-nim please keep up with the good work!
Translation Quality: Terrible, feels like an edited machine translation.
Stability of Updates: New novel.
Story Development: Slow paced chapters with padding, cliche.
Character Design: Flat characters, main character has cliche personality.
World Background: It's Earth, somehow in USA.
I am very happy with the fact that our mc talents lye in formations instead of pills or weapon forging. I believe those have already been done and overused by other authors so this is a great divergence from the norm. Thanks for the hard work so far keep it up.
LMAO. Just looking through Harem section for new novel to be add in library. Encounter this wild novel with hilarious synopsis. So, here I am, writing a review with 5* just for that synopsis. Added the novel to library. Looking foward for future chapters. Good luck
Nice and easy going translations keep going. I hope this work will pass trial.
I like the boss chatroom.
After the heroes with the huge debt and the adorable sister... why every times it"s the same plot
A minute of silence for another excellent novel buried by the webnovel
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We have a main character with a decent personality, an adorable female lead, and minor characters that have their own character developments.
There are no annoying characters that simply live to advance the plot or provoke the MC.
The fact that the MC is not blindly arrogant or petty is also a plus.
It is set in a cultivation world, and has a heartwarming and leisure vibe. He's living with his lazy master and pampering her in various ways to earn currency for his cheat, stunning her and other characters with his max level skills derived from the system. The characters have their own unique personalities so their interactions are satisfying to read.
It's brilliant and enjoyable.
How did this even get chosen. As others have said it is an atrocious translation that think mtl would be better to read. Story wise what I can read it's not bad but it is of course full of cliches. Would be better to find the real name and get it on mtl than read here.
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