Awesome story, I’ve binged it over the last few days and must say that this is one of the best novels I’ve read so far. Shoutout to the author who delivers such a masterpiece for free
Great!
One of my favs. Currently up to date at Chapter 551. Glad to see this novel made it here. I'll try and leave a semi-detailed review.Starts out slow and the MC doesn't feel strong, but then boom, MC gets really OP and the story just takes off. Don't abandon it, trust me it gets amazing. I also love the detailed explanations and the effort the author puts into makes everything sound plausible and logical. World-building is amazing. Initially it's very lacking but as more and more details are revealed, you start to see the scope of the world and understand the situation a lot better. Def wait before judging the world-building.Characters are amazing too. Have their own beliefs and personalities. You understand how different characters think and when the focus shifts to a different character, you instantly get an idea of how he's going to act. The villains are great too. Some are kinda one-dimensional but others(like *minor spoilers* a certain head of a family) are actually well-developed characters.MC feels strong but not totally OP and there's some really decent conflicts here. I absolutely adore how he uses his brain to solve everything. You can see his thought process and can foresee his plans and how he experiments with his ability and it makes him feel a lot more relatable. The reader can follow alongside his plans and ideas. Like, one minute you'll be like "what if he does this thing with that thing" and 2 paragraphs later, he realizes that too, and does that thing and it's so satisfying. Honestly there's not much more I can say. Theres very few cliches and deus ex machinas and it never gets boring except for a little bit at the start. Definitely give it a read. I binged it in 2 days and loved it. Don't get discouraged by the slow starting point of the MC. Stick with it and it'll be a really great read.
So far the story is great would be perfect if the author describes everything a bit more such as mc, setting/background/new significant place such as when the mc got to the sect author never really described the mc's first impression and the surroundings. Maybe the author will do it in future chapter but it's always better to described as the character moves on his journey, well at least what he is felling and what he sees in his surroundings. Also, try to describe the characters appearance a bit more. This seems to be a major issue in the original novel section, hopefully the author improves on this. One more thing that's killing me is please use capital letter for first letter of the sentence and names. Overall the story is great but needs more details, you want the readers to feel or try to feel what the character is experiencing and picture everything.
It's a pretty good novel. I specially like the fact that main characters powers is related to eyes which is pretty unique since MC with powers dedicated to eyes only is very rare and most of them are not well made. If there is one thing I am not satisfied with that would be the fact that he is naive and why the hell is he so nice with Greg's parents why did he cried so easily.I mean it makes no sense that he is a cry baby when he lived pretty much all his life in pain and agony. Author I think it would be good if MC is somewhat like the main character of "LUCIFERS DESENDENT". Keep up the good work. Other than MC being naive I like everything else.
No updates today?
I loved the story ❤️ and am happy with the ending. thank you.....
One of my favorite books so far! One of the most well written flow from one chapter to the next.
Please - I need more - it can’t end like this ?!
really good!
Loving this
Enjoyed the book, but too graphic on the sex scenes.