This story has a lot of potential, the MC is very cool headed and the game mentioned gives players many different classes to choose from and has immersive battle tactics involved. I only wish updates were regular.
Okay, I need to talk about Lu Wujiu drawing that line on the floor. THREE STEPS. He literally measured it out. This man is so petty and I love it. The fact that he noticed her symptoms were worse than his last time and immediately used it as leverage to control the physical distance between them? That is peak Lu Wujiu energy. He's cold-blooded, fastidious, refuses to touch anyone, and yet here he is, negotiating a boundary with a sword like some kind of emotional architect. And Lian Qiao—oh, Lian Qiao. She sneaks into his room at midnight because some cursed Gu is boiling her blood, and what does she do? She immediately starts theorizing about him being afraid of Miss He showing up. Classic deflection. She's desperate, suffering, and her first instinct is to poke at HIM. That's not just rivalry, that's obsession disguised as antagonism. The way they orbit each other—she can't stand him, he won't let her out of his sight, they're both suffering from the same curse and neither will admit it out loud. The scene where she's rummaging through his books and finds Notes on Raising Cats? That detail alone tells you everything about Lu Wujiu's secret soft side. This man ranks first in Daoist arts and keeps a book about cats under his mattress. Meanwhile Lian Qiao is questioning her entire understanding of him and his reading habits. They're two people who would rather die than be vulnerable with each other, and the Gu forces them into the same room. I'm not okay.
I love how you described the scenery so perfectly. The fact that you made me live through the book as I read it made it a lot more enjoyable.I must say that I couldn't put it down, and I was glad that I had read it.Good Job Author, keep it up!!
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Writing Quality is good, does not cause a severe headache while reading.Stability of Update was mentioned so it's perfect.Story Developments is good as it does not go astray too much.Character Design weird as ****... I know it's going to that BL route but... at least make a 'trap' well I guess it's the author's choice, but this was just my opinion.World Background is okay? except for that lazy hospital 'XXX' term on the chapter one, I hate when I see those things, just name it I guess.So yah, this novel here is okay. Do try it... I guess i'll continue reading it too
I could bear with the author's grammar since english isn't his main language but there are too many mistakes in other points. Romance was very forced to the point that he was already calling the princess of the Yan Empire his future wife after they had just met in a single chapter. He doesn't act like someone who was trapped and ignored by his father for 8 years.I would continue to read the novel since I like ones with systems but there is no doubt that this novel doesn't can't even stabilize itself.
is there is hareem ,hope not cz i hate it ? is mc cold and ruthless or he forgive his female enemy cz she's pretty or he helps every one that he meets and spend ressources and time just for someone he just met ihope there's non from the above cz im just sick of those novels
I have yet to read the story fully but the description is interesting. I will be looking forward to reading this. I hope the author keeps a steady pace throughout to make it enjoyable.
Bad... I cannot stress this anymore. it’s just bad. Translation isn’t that of amazing quality, at times you jjst don’t know what is going on in the least or why things happen as they do.Author just might have been very bad at math, maybe he skipped over something that explained why. Dunno.MC is very dumb, no development, no actual personality. Boring.Unexplained things happen for no particular reason.Story just feels super forced and uncontrolled. Amateurish.Nothing stands out.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??? beast taming books are sooo cool !!! even better when there's cheat code!! ????
Deserves to get picked I'm currently loving itCharacters are good and the plot is currently going at a good pace.There isn't enough chapters to actually judge the book but right now it's great.
NOOOOOO IT DIDNT GET PICKED, I swear I should really stop reading trial reads before they get picked or else Ill grow attached to it too much. This was such a good one as well :((