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If the dungeon ever gets a revamp I think it would be cool to have style transition floors that make sence like the castle, for example you could do a mining cave -> mining cave -> underground pool leading to an water themed level (beach, underwater, whatever) transition to a jungle/forest -> dead forest area -> dealands/desert -> volcano -> mountains -> snowy mountains -> cloud area
From the very start, just the prologue tell me this novel is a banger, seriously it's so well written. I just finished to read the first 2 lines and I knew I was going to enjoy myself and I was right
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Went will you release more chapter. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!! MORE CHAPTER!!
Still waiting for this story tO go on, and of course i would be very the soonest possible, want to find out how the doctor pervert one, reacts to a newbie,
Pretty nice story. The writing quality can improve because I believe in ya. Still, I'm giving these 5 star for the effort in trying to give entertainment to readers. I hope you continue your writing journey and don't be discourage along the way. Good luck and I hope I can see the end of this novel.
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An interesting plague.inc concept with huge potential. Looking forward to more of this wonderful piece of art.Characters are likeable and interesting. Relatable too. The world-building is fabulous with many aspects being very realistic with a blend of fantasy.
This story will definitely be great . So please do read it. I'm telling this from experience the first part of this story was awesome so keep up the good work author. Good luck with this new story
Amazing.I have nothing else to comment but this.the grammer the story and everything else is out of this world.I really love everything about this
Great start, detailed system interface, references and good grammar...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
