Wish I can support this book with more than my review. However recommending will also have an importance. From what I've read so far. it was satisfying and the description was tangible enough to improve my imagination. Nice read overall!
What can I say more??I love this Book ?❤️???????????????❤️
Yep. Its good. It has decent start, intriguing characters, and the first dialogue in the prologue just blew me off by an instant. This book's got potential.???
If the MC doesnt get with Liu Xia imma be mad.
The story is nice. I like mc, he is funny. If you like chill novel than this is for you. This novel is not boring. Little about this novel. I think mc is in different world that is very similar to modern world. He somehow know, remember movies and songs from his world which is good because it funny how people react when he start doing his ****. He want to make movie, to make money and run away with the money, marry beautiful woman, settle down and live happily after. Which I think he won’t since he will be really famous in latter chapter in my opinion. I mean he will marry beautiful woman in latter chapter no doubt but not the way he want. Find out yourself If you don’t understand what going on here. Overall?????.
Really love the concept! An ancient magic sword finding itself in an 80's style sci-fi world? That is just cool!Unfortunately, your writing doesn't do the story justice yet. The pacing is a bit off, with grammatical errors, run-on sentences and an overuse of ellipses (...). The characters are fun and you've defined their personalities rather well, so that's going for you.I look forward to seeing how you improve. Keep it up!
Grammer is terrible idk why people said the authors english was good, this is torture just can't stand it. Story is ok if cliche but feels forced when author breaks the 4th wall all the time.
Everything I habe read so far was great the pacing was a little bit slow but I think it is realy neccesery for the character development which is in my oppinion the best part of this novel, it feels like the characters habe real egos. Furthermore I realy like the concept of the story like the worldbuilding, which is already interessting, or how the mc grow stronger by making contracts instand of cultivating or having a systhem. This realy makes this novel this novel special and I would recoment it to everyone to at least give it a shot an try it
Very fun novel about a OP pervert as he has fun traveling meeting lots of other OP girls to have fun adventures with :D Although its about a pervert thankfully it never gets to crazy and is similar to High School DxD but in a cultivators work with all kinds of crazy magic and monster girls :D
The novel is nice but need a little touch up some grammatical error needs correcting but all the same I have the plot it's really one of the best I've read just try updating faster .
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