Really love the concept! An ancient magic sword finding itself in an 80's style sci-fi world? That is just cool!Unfortunately, your writing doesn't do the story justice yet. The pacing is a bit off, with grammatical errors, run-on sentences and an overuse of ellipses (...). The characters are fun and you've defined their personalities rather well, so that's going for you.I look forward to seeing how you improve. Keep it up!