- "Pangolin System online"- said an officer- "finalizing in three minutes"
*Bang!*
"It's not fun anymore there, and besides Sister Ayane throne is empty, I would like to see who would shed blood for that seat" She sneered and then coldly laugh with a hint of danger in her eyes.
how did the invisible dragon be born how did he become strong
MTL translation with a few edits.I expected better.
Lecture agréable le roman est intriguant et captivant merci beaucoup.
As a Master's (Top 500) League of Legends player in Season 8, I would think I have an edge over other readers in this certain type of genre, so here are my two cents on the novel.The novel itself is great, I thoroughly enjoyed each of the chapters. Good writing along with good pacing makes the story an interesting read. It has decent enough characters and game backstory to make it enjoyable.The story does seem unrealistic to a certain sense. I think a good MOBA story boils down to how much the author itself understands the genre of MOBA's. Although he does explain the basic nitty-gritty of game mechanics, he fails to mention any important or groundbreaking that players with more skill would notice, and that will have an effect on how far the novel can progress linearly.It's fine since these guys are middle schoolers and are still learning about the game, but if he wants to bring this novel from a lighthearted read to an actual quality MOBA novel, it's going to take a lot of work. Overall, still a good read. There's no other MOBA novel to compare this to, so I guess it is a staple. There are things that could be improved, but the things the author does writes, he does correctly.
Please continue. You're doing a great job ?
I just hope it is never dropped. The author maybe has to pace the story a little better.
Yes.
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I have been on webnovel for 5 years now, but this is the first novel that I bought the privilege for with money, earlier even if I liked a novel I would just use fast passes or multiple accounts to reach the rest but this novel is amazing. ??❤️. Amazing work author, keep it up. love ittt ?