Good writing quality with some grammatical mistakesStability of updating is kinda slow 12 chapter a weekStory development is really good I like the pacing of the storyCharacters are mostly well thought out and not one dimensional.World bacround is amazing and makes you see it clearly in your headA hidden gem worth your time.Start to really make sense around chapter 11.This is a story for those that like intelligent mc with strategic military thinking which usually pays of with a glorious slaughter.While not perfect it's still much better than most novels you will read.
Love it +!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yay!✨✨ another bangtan story, me giving myself 5'star? for writing adventure☠️, it's so interesting to write weird stuff, I like it???️Enjoy
SO FREAKING GOOD!!!!!! This is gonna have you at the edge of your seating wanting more! One chapter a day isn’t enough ITS THAT GOOD ?? i can’t get enough! It’s getting so juicy ?
You should give it try cuz the story is really good, the depiction of the characters is also very interesting. Well developed story with good world background.
Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
good story, it has potential, the only downside is that the author blocked the chapters behind the paywall too early
I like the story and the characters. Seems to have constant updates and I like the direction. There are some minor grammatical errors but it doesn't bother me. I hope this review will inspire you to keep writing. Please don't drop.
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The premise doesn't really make sense IMO. "I get stronger by doing nothing" - dude, you're a cultivator! Cultivating is basically just that - sitting around and magically getting stronger! You aren't special! Literally everyone else is also doing that!
man! this novel has potential to Surpass solo levelling..... believe me just do hard work and develop a great Storyline...... I appreciate your work man. Keep it up....