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After few moments of the wait, Veer said again breaking the reverie of Araya "But there is an ultimate law of nature which can never be broken."
A chill crept down her spine and she immediately rounds up everyone, demanding to know who had entered before.
invisible dragon:come at me quickly!
I have love -hate relationship with this book . well it is somewhat slow paced book but way it goes on makes it really interesting, also i like how mc excels at only poem (for now....not typical all knowing mc).
This is a story leaning a bit on the macho side, battle battle battle everywhere, character development is slow, there is no romance ( none whatsoever), most of the battle techniques of the mc are introduced abruptly ( like there is no training or comprehension session, when he's fighting, at the very least second he erupts with a new technique to blow other people's mind),a few stuffs are exaggerated ( damn, I'm giving way too many negative opinions), take the story with a pinch of salt and hopefully you can enjoy it
Amazing Novel author waiting on new updates
Haha, the story is good, don't know what else to say, just read it... Come on how many more words before you let me post this review...Finally...
Author-san, I loved your previous novel, that's why Im willing to give this a try, but before I do, I have a question, will this stroy have NTR? I hope not. :(
I like this a lot, its interesting and the concept is cool. Hope for more chapters though. Overall, either wait for more or enjoy it chapter by chapter.
kinda good but not at the sametime I don't know really???
Very nice work...???The story line is amazing...with many twists and tangles....your hardwork can be seen their....work little harder and you can extend the story....though it was amazing....
Nice book. If you are a sci-fi fan like i am then please read this book. I quite liked the fact that this book has a rich section of vocabulary and I found no grammatical errors. Overall it is amazing.
