Well, looks generic enough. King of assassins/mercenaries? Check. Reincarnation? Check. Martial/mystical arts world? Check. Crippled potential/body constitution/cultivation? Check. Adult mc on his second life acting like a spoiled and clueless child? Check. Loses your girl and has to get her back? Check. Duels to death against anyone who has slighted mc? Check. Young master antagonists? Check. Repetitive plot? Check. Same old plot devices, plot armor, tropes and cliches? Check. ‘Nuff said.
I have read so many book and this book is one of the best I love the way the character uses his system and the plot it is nice. great book recommended read
A very typical light-novel style work, somewhat reminded me of the Japanese anime RE:CREATERS but I don't think they are the same except for the part they are all about fictional characters trying to break the fourth wall and get in touch with their creators (Didn't watch the anime myself only heard about it so I'm not really sure).There's a maturity and a degree of completion in author's writing style, so I assume the writer either read lots of light novels like the MC or practiced writing them for some time already, and the language is simple and very easy to read--though may lack some sort of characteristic/personality in there and seem a little plain, but it doesn't dampen much of the reading experience so it's not really a big problem, the writer may work on it if he wishes to better his writing than just "light-novel style". There are lots of casual and daily usage of language like abbreviation in the text, but in this case since it's a light novel whose MC and most characters are of young generations, this I would rather call a merit instead of a disadvantage, for it adds some realness from life into the fiction, same for the details of how otaku people like MC form up together in a club, organize those RP activities and interact with each other, showing that author is clearly someone in this circle.As for advice I don't really have much to give, because clearly the author positioned his work to be a light novel and in this sense it is already rather well-written: the writing quality is above the standard, the plots are progressing in a very proper pace, the characters are presented...well not to say very vividly but in a very comic way. Though for people who are already very into Japanese light novel/manga/anime for a long time, the story, setting and characters won't be that original, but still because it's fairly written, it should still be enjoyable to read.The only thing I could ask--besides double check some minor typing mistakes--is to step beyond the light novel circle and add something more unique and unseen into the work. It is only an impression I got intuitively from the text so not necessarily correct, but it seems that the author is the type of people who's very much in-in in one circle (or one type of circles) of hobbies and social contacts, and that kind of feature also reflects in the text--it seems to be created solely for the light novel circle and doesn't really show any intention of doing anything else.Of course it's not a bad thing--it is something everyone has an "expertise" would do and only people who have some sort of "expertise" are interesting, but to stay in one place for too long will make it harder to think outside of the box and create something of fundamental originality.P.S. A boy I'm having a crush in college right now is called Max XD
WOW! I have to say that I am very intrigued! From the start to where I am now (Chapter 5) I'm left on the edge of my seat wanting more. Can't wait to see where this will go. The story draws you in from the start, causing you to crave more to read.The only thing is that sometimes there are a few missed capitalizations, but other than that there is nothing to complain about.Hope to read more soon! Keep up the good work, author! :)
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GUYS, I FIXED MY MISTAKE!CHAPTERS 01 TO 40 ARE NOW FREE TO READ ON VOLUME 00!!!You can follow up from Ch41 on regular volume 01, without having to worry about paying for chapters so early on the story.Enjoy!!!
Just finished it,Well honestly the concept was quite good for a football fan like me, not that original but satisfactory given the lack of football’s related light novel.The football world is really respected, I mean he must have done tons of research on football’s player in order to write this book, each player’s talent make sense to me, some football move like the pelopina turn are welcome.Well mlt translation isn’t the worst but isn’t pleasant either, RIP Robinho —> Hovenue ----SPOILER-----A good point in my opinion is that the romantic subplot don’t take much place in this sport novel.I’m a bit mixed feeling about the 200chap+ of the story, in one part I feel that the story wasn’t kept for too long, lot of matches have been skiped and surely is becoming strong rapidly, on the other hand he is way to strong and the story lose some interest when he simply don’t know how to lose. There where some matches where they are 6 men on him and his pro team still can’t win whitout him, maybe misunderstanding due to mlt but puzzled me
I really love the story. I cant wait for him to get drafted by a team in tge nba so he can play against or with a nba player in a profetional league .
I liked the start of the story, however, the latest chapters have been boring and lifeless. The main character has multiple issues, the guy doesn't feel like a human at, more like a robot, and has no personality. His girlfriend loses their baby due to a miscarriage. The guy doesn't care at all, doesn't even visit her once.
So far ... I'm totally in love with this book. A strong female lead was always my weakness, and that's actually only one of the reasons why I am hooked right now.The plot is promising, the style of writing is amazingly wonderful, not to mention the interesting pick for the characters.... differently on my library ?
It's quite rare for me to give such a low rating.. The premise is amazing, that's the reason I put this novel in my library, apparently in the end I'm greatly disappointed. The translation still bearable, a little stiff but still fine for reading experience. The story development is cliche, mundane with a lot of cut out 1-D cannon fodder with tons of senseless logic that's bordering on strings of Deus ex machina. In regards of character design, the MC idea is good but I truly can't fathom how idiot the MC turned out to be, the hunting adventures already told us how much of muscled-brain he is which is just how irritating to remember the very same person boast a very high theoretical foundation.. For the other characters I have explained my position...But the one that takes the cake is the world building, truly sloppy, lazy, without any regard for historical context, the author never takes proper research to establish the world building, the origin level, the world evolution, etc. Each of them is contradicting every established statement that was made just in previous chapters... I just choose to stop reading when the author stated that hot weapon is gone, strategic approach is no longer followed, not mentioning how insane it's that such an important model analysis skill actually put as underrated in the world where advancement of science already at its height... I'm sorry for the translator to pick this work, there are many other work that need translation that is better than this one... Peace, sorry for my ranting
A lot of nationalism and racism apathetic mc one dimensional side characters it isn't worth reading.