The premise is interesting and the story isn’t bad but what kills it for me is the grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writing Quality: 4 StarsThe Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh...English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels.The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good.Stability of Update: 2 StarsWriting novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity.Story Development: 5 StarsThe pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady.The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base.Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important.Character Design: 5 StarsThe main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon.The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people.Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies.For more information, you can read it yourself...World Background: 5 StarsThe Author said, "It was good... I think."
It's a story about a run away bride...but wait it isn'tit was all apart of the plan and creates the chaotic mystery that set up the future of the story,a brilliant twist on a cliche opening and it keeps me hooked hoping to learn more about the real reason for the mystery...
The story was my favorite until the author decided that he was bored with the story and ended it in one chapter with plenty of story left to go in my opinion.
I dont understand Author why do you keep writing even though your book has like 4 ratings .
Can I just rate the novel without giving a review? Hmm ... looks like I can't. So I have to add a review too beside the rating, and it has to be more than 140 characters.
This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
trash only good is translation quality..............................................................................................................................
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Amazing story very good the plot is very good, the personality of the protagonist is amazing if all the villains were like that it would be much better, the harem or the heroines are amazing especially the Empress or his wife
Hi author DhaRylLoner I just want to say that your story Once Upon A Mistake is not just a novel. It will nice if webnovel will make a film adaptation on this story. It is so awesome story! I would like to read it again and again. I am still waiting for the book 2 by the way. Hehe that's all and thank you for the very awesome story!
atleast don't have a typo in your novel name