I am the author, of course; I will rate my novel five stars, but seriously it is good,
Do read and write a review.
TLDR: Read the book! It’s Amazing!
The quality of of this novel is top notch. The main character is smart and makes decisions based on reason and logic which make his wins feel earned and losses don’t seem to come from no where.
The other characters actually feel fleshed out and have motivations that don’t only revolve around the MC. It is common to see novels especially on Webnovel have their author dumb down every character their MC interacts with in order to make them feel smarter. That is not the case with this novel. Any one of the many interesting side characters feel as though they could have been an MC in their own right.
The world building is already amazing and the MC hasn’t even left his original starting county yet. The author has been clever with their use of different ideologies being more prevalent in different places which makes what country your from actually matter. Usually in these novels there’s just a bunch of random ones and a “Forbidden” mysterious country but here there is actual depth to the backgrounds.
The fight scenes have all been well written and have shown qualities of different characters shining even in the fights and the author seems to understand the art of showing and not telling.
Overall this is a hidden gem. I’m glad to have been one of this novels first readers and wish it the success it deserves for being such good quality.
Nice storyline... It will be more nice if its chapter updates will be more frequent ...
i loved the concept but i feel like i am reading a story created CHAT GPT
This was an interesting series, and I was pleasantly surprised, but it did have some errors such as grammatical and capitalization errors, such as inn being fully capitalized whenever said, but not too many to make it unreadable. I think that Chang being like completely shocked when he sees a naked girls body is accurate and fine for his character, although the fanservice seems unnecessary when describing Vendola naked in some parts. of the series. There are some references that just dont make sense, and even when expanded upon just should be replaced. Other than that its basically a typical fantasy Isekai, pretty good read and I was pleasantly surprised. Try it out.
-4/5 Writing quality -5/5 Story development-5/5 Character design (The character are all very unique and we'll written)-5/5 Update stability -5/5 World background This book really is a breath of fresh air in the midst of all other system novels, I won't spoil anything but the system is very unique as is the world but most of all the horror elements are very appreciated !!
"Filled with enchanting worlds, compelling characters, and unexpected twists, 'Whispering Stars' is an immersive journey you won't want to end."
This is review for the first 36 chapters.Barely introduced to the story but I’ll attempt a review. author mentioned the obvious comparisons to HP and sure there are some similarities but replaces the childishness with a bit more maturity.We’re meeting some potentially interesting characters. We have the bones of world that could bring the story up a few levels. I’ve never really been a fan of a world where mere words were all that was needed to cast spells, but there isn’t enough story to determine the nuances of spell casting yet.I’ll write a better review in 70 chapters
Good story, starter of the story was good , characters in the story were also matched very well,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.... .............................................. .........................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I don't often write reviews, but I figured I should try for this one. This review was made as of chapter 76, so keep that in mind.
Writing quality: 4.5/5 (Rounded to 5) The only real problems are the occasional mix up of Your/You're and Their/There, but it isn't too bad, and definitely happens less often than some other novels have em. There are occasional misspellings, but they aren't bad. Overall, it is easy to understand what is going on, and what the author meant to say.
Stability of Updates: As of now, they are uploading pretty much daily, 5/5.
Story Development 5/5: While it may be too early to say, so far it has gone nice, with the main character experiencing many roadblocks in the form of his own teammates, enemy teams, and outside of the game, which makes this story not only about Basketball but the goings-on outside the games and training, which I like personally.
Character Design 5/5: As far as his team goes, everyone has a different personality, and that also extends to pretty much everyone else outside the court as well. Though I am pretty sure that eventually, the author will have to re-use some character types, since there is bound to be a lot of characters, both in court and off-court as the MC grows up, but that won't be too much of a problem. Especially when you consider 90% of the Chinese novels on this site re-use the same character type for every villain.
World Background 5/5: The world thus far seems mostly like our own, and as he meets people who he recognizes from his past life, we start to get to learn more and more about the basketball scene from his past life, and we start to learn how it influences choices he has and will make.
Overall I like the story personally, and the main complaint I have seen is how the MC is lacking in social situations, but when you consider that he has focused on Basketball for 20 years, and pretty much only got a job to stop his parents from worrying, it sorta makes sense that he wouldn't be too good at this stuff.
This FF is literally for prople Who knows nothing of naruto. There is so many plot holes I cant even read this shi. He’s so weak bruv. How are you an Otsusuki but cant handle your own ****n chaKra when your chakra passively increases your own strength? Like what? Imagine have so much chakra but cant even fight? The author said hIs mother was gonna train him jus for hIm to just learn about his clan. i dont really think that counts as training. Go actually watch the show and stop writing this nonsense.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing