Even though is your first novel, have already seen a future in it, not that am a judge or anything Hahaha
It's an interesting story! I hope others love it like I do! And look forward to seeing what happens next in this very interesting and intriguing novel! ❤❤❤❤❤ Thank you Author and translators! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!
sorry but how long are we gonna have to wait for a new chapter.
I understand that you are trying to focus on your other novel but posting chapter here and there can't hurt, right.
I thank you for making novels and know it can be draining most of the time trying to keep schedule.
Is this the same fanfic that is in wattpad?
It is great to my opinion
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I like how the characters are introduced ch 1 and the bonds between them. I also found the Kobe part funny- the writing is good and fleshed out well. The part with the nightmare (ch 3 I think) was rlly good with how the emotions were laid out and the monster
Amazing.There is only a few novels that are good enough but this....and from a first timer.... IS AWESOME and better that most first timer novels
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The story is...ok, but it's also really rushed and the lack of proper grammar kind of hurts my brain a little bit, the character is kind of meh and so is the world, though mostly it's the messy writing that really annoys me, does the author not know how to properly punctuate? If English isn't your first language than I can understand that but if that's the case shouldn't you get a beta reader or something? Also, the story is really rushed, and the MC is kind of all over the place, I'll drop it for now but I'll check on it every once in a while to see if it gets better
The beginning is a little confusing and the grammar and punctuation is really bad.this story has potential to be great but a proof reader is needed.
This is currently my favourite novel now...love your writing...although initially it seems similar to Jay Aslan... But the way the storyline is going right now., i love it more than Jay Aslan.. Keep updating regularly!!!!!
I don't like how the book mentions the author to get out of explaining certain things it make the book less immersive than it can become.
From the start it doesn't do a good job character building