I'm really interested in what he gonna do in the future hope author don't drop XPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
Sword and shieldGreat swordCross bow (Bowgun)Do you play Monster Hunter World in **4 too?Putting Monster Hunter element into Wuxia novelThis is revolutionary Wuxia light novel!
It's pretty good cause the MC has brain. Although there's a loophole like in 3 chapter the MC has max level but in chapter 15 his attribute is the same as a level 1 character in normal game. Or maybe in the novel level 1 character has 1 point in every attribute, who know.
To make money or lose money is a problem lol. Make more money causes lossing money and lossing money make greater amount of money. To ubderstand what I said, go read this comdy story XD.
All in all, a solid novel.There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit. Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem. The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there. Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
Awesome I love it from chapter twenties ahead.
Well, it's full of the same things you see in cultivation novels all the time. My problem with this novels is the cheat. It said on the tin that the MC can get a return from x2 to x10000 cultivation. until now, when MC cultivated for about 1-2 months he only got 100 about 3 times as the highest. if you put 10000 numbers in a RNG there is less then 1% to get less then 100 so consistently. Let's not talk about the stupidity of cultivating for days and then transferring said cultivation at only x10 when he could cultivate 1 hour - transfer. if the chance was truly random, for every hour he would gain from 2 to 10000 hours of cultivation, which can be repeated 12 times in a day(assuming he does other human things in the other 12). Sadly, smart MC make for low word count....
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Currently on Chapter 621I'll start by saying that this story has a power system that I've never read about before and it's a pretty good system as well. MC is a hard worker and has an interesting personality. Story development is pretty good so far imo, the only reason I gave it a 4-star rating regarding that is because I can't find a category regarding nationalism. ? I mean, I don't know if the author even bothered masking the nationalism feels when writing this but the shade thrown on the other "sectors" (aka countries) is getting to be too much at times. ? Anyway, besides that the story is a solid read so far. 8/10!Tl;dr: Good read but power through nationalism.
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The author didn't even bother to research how a military school works... even though it seems to be very serious, most of the moments are pure reviews, even with the instructors. mc "grew up" in a military family but didn't even know the basic behavior to be followed... it is mentioned that he did more push-ups than his superior but he is not punished for it??? would this clearly be an act of showing arrogance, something extremely derided in the army (he would be punished with jail for showing himself above his superior even when they are trying to teach equality) and about the bedspreads being made in a specific way? I don't know in china (bunch of sick people) but in other places this is not necessary... what is necessary is for the person to maintain order in his "personal space". is it serious about them taking up arms so soon??? It takes months of psychological training to ensure that there is no psychopath (not all countries have this procedure, as physical and mental tests are required to enter a military school, at least in public schools)
How long is the break going to be please let me know I spent a lot to not have it end