The story is quite interesting. the character is not useless to remain traumatized due to his ability but to use it correctly in a separate way.Now I can only say that they should read the novel, it is quite interesting.
I haven’t read it yet, but I am currently working on Evo Prison and just finished binge reading Rise of the Hunters, BOTH of which are AMAZING reads. EVERYONE SUPPORT THIS AUTHOR AND COMMENT. COMMENTS ARE WORTH IT FOR THE AUTHOR, EVEN IF IT IS JUST A THANK YOU!
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
A typical MC in his journey from desolateness to realizing his dreams in a world where Swordsmen and Mages are abound. Lost his parents at childhood, cheated by life and almost tired of living. Until his first contact with magic...
To be honest, the novell was well-written, and I enjoyed it, but I stopped at Chapter 73 because it started feeling too similar to "Fourth Prince's Debauchery". It's not that I didn't like "Fourth Prince's Debauchery"; in fact, I enjoyed it a lot despite its poor ratings. I've reread it three or four times because I liked it so much, which makes me feel uneasy about this novell seeming so similar. I even noticed in one chapter where the author forgot to change a character's name and left it as "Akilah," who is the leader of the gang in that other novell. In short, this novella isn't bad; I just felt uncomfortable continuing to read it. (Don't get me wrong, it's not a complete copy; the similarity started only with the introduction of the gang and its storyline, everything else is different.)
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As good as it is, there is alot of time skips and no details. Just listing out mc deeds majority of the time. Needs detail of other people and more dialogue because it feels more of an outline of a story. Sad because I felt there might've been something but with no character there is no story.
This novel is honestly impeccable , story building , character development , all of it is exquisite. If you're looking for a mash between a cultivation and a fantasy novel this is it for you.
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I've enjoyed this story a lot thus far. The story is coming together nicely and the characters are all enjoyable. I look forward to what comes next