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Thestory is full of holes. And there is no chaptet to do world building. The names of the places turn into chinese and somehow the magical world becomes chinese. Somehow huaxis also exists and the names of peoole might start in english but i have the feeling that it like western names in a western starting world turning slowly into ancient china. Its makes you confused without reason.Its making my head hurt. I will read something else especially because the fun parts are skipped all the time
With vivid settings and complex characters, they bring out raw emotions and moral conflicts, making you reflect on human nature and survival. Each story is a mix of suspense, drama, and deep questions about life, keeping you hooked till the end. A must-read for those who enjoy powerful storytelling in the face of chaos.
Okay!! I admit that sci-fi stories intrigue me, and this One seems to have potential!!
I am liking it so far. The main character is not brain dead . He thinks but he is still making mistakes. Villian is also setting up good . Currently I want more chapters
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
Set in the early 20s, this is a core system novel I first published for a contest but later dropped out of. Here it is still. #urban #sliceoflife #singleFL #system. Enjoy Luca's story as he navigates the surprisingly tense world of motorsport, striving to take his engine's performance from B-level to S-level. Let's read.
Here the shameless author's review! I'm not voting this work 5 stars because it's mine, absolutely not, but because I find the Idea of a new type of energy like the Genetic Energy and the use of Unique ablities, really makes the book UNIQUE in his own way.
"Oh thank you sir Rioy Kiyoshi I will do it."
We stoped on silent hearing a long explain from Mamat.
I shocked in silent.
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