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After I read the book I knew for sure it'd be my fav it actually has an eerie feeling so worth it
唯—一次点评!真的好看好吧,不是拖晚上看总有种恐怖感,已经很久没遇见这种高质量小说了支持!作者别睡了!起来连更个百八十章面道求你了
Easy to read, original ( to me ). I like that in the beginning the FL comes across as weak and timid, which to an extent she is (more modest and shy), but also turns out to have strong points such as staying calm in stress situation and quick thinking. She turns out to be strong a lot of the time when overcoming initial fear without suddenly showcasing superhero qualities. Also pretty decent length of chapters and pricing ( in comparison )
don't give up on the story keep writing am waiting
System genre with action focused story, MC is not stupid but more realistic. The writing style is pretty descriptive, somehow suited on the vibe of the story. Very unique so far with setting takes place in hell. Recommended to read!
As a reader, I found your novel to be an exciting adventure that skillfully balances action and character development. Shouta’s growth from an unsure teenager to a confident adventurer is captivating, and the world of Aran feels rich with potential. I enjoyed the dynamic between Shouta and Lydia, as well as the mysterious elements that keep me eager to learn more. The blend of combat, magic, and personal stakes kept me hooked, and I’m curious to see how Shouta’s journey unfolds at the academy. The story is engaging, with enough twists to keep me coming back for more! Can’t wait for next chapters
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This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
i wish its not the same plot like others made about ceo's
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Well this is like one of the worst novel I have ever read maybe the author is a beginner writer if not you have no talent in being a author I think you should find other work.
Good book loved the story development as well as writing quality
