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so at first I'm intrigued by the title and the synopsis and the story seems good but then suddenly takes wrong turn in chapter 13, I get it that the protagonist still naive and such but believing that he just planted by some nano tracker in his blood by someone and agreed to become guard/pawn just so stupid. like is he doesn't have common sense usually people will probably attack since he's alone anyway and the fact he already said he's a support just makes it worst, is he afraid of his background? I just can't comprehend it. I will try read more and probably stop when I seen any very stupid decision like this one and hopefully there's none
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it's a bit early to write a review, but some readers didn't really see the story and strategy of the story. like reader write "The MC is alone on his island, without company, and he summons monsters that allow him to defeat other humans who are neither friend nor foe, they simply exist somewhere outside. His only company are the invocations and strange voices"well you are very wrong my friend, if you read the potential and how the story is writing, you maybe will see your mistake.the MC Richard, is not alone at all, in the beginning he has already have a company of 100 resident that he can talk to, and there no. will grow a lot in the future, what you read until now is only the start, and if you read the Synopsis of this amazing novel, you will read a few of the characters that will join him much later in the story like: Desert Pharoah, a Demonic Scorpion King, a Mechanical Giant, a Demon Baron, a Blood Archduke, a Five-colored Evil Dragon, and a Fallen Angel.in my opinion the Author, and the translator and editor add a lot of heart, thought, planning, and hard work in to this novel. we didn't read a great story(novel). i hope it will be pick up, even if not it is a big lose for us, we can see how hard work the translator and editor pot in this novel. thank you so much guys :)
it's pretty cool I would like to have the real name of the novel please ..............................................................................
Starting off the story with a self nuke, nice touch. I will be watching your updates to see how the story comes along. I expect great things.
again writing review. i am really enjoying story.
It’s a really interesting story, I’m surprised that it doesn’t catch a lot of people’s attention.. The plot looks good too, and characters looks exciting too, keep writing , author ??Added to my collection ?
Good fan fiction i hope you will continue it and not be like other authors The novel is good from construction to the formulation all I can say is that it's marvelous ????
✅Logical school life✅Good vampire progression✅Interesting npcs❌Short chapters (Author has other novels to write so its understandable.)❌Ability system (Author didn't reveal much about it so I won't complain for now.)❌MC couldn't accept his godsend power (Honestly I think his ignorance about him being a vampire after system told with so many ways is a little forced by the author. Well come on.. He doesn't live in cave and hunt mammoths for living every teenager has some fantasies about vampires theese days but of course he may think drinking blood for living is gross so I won't complain about it too.)Overall it's a good read.
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
