Nice write up, hun ?
Which chap does this happen?
I have a question at the end right does he end up with multiple women or does have just one wife (I despise polygamous relationships but I didn’t see the tag but it does say harem so idk)
This novel will come in TOP 10 most hilarious novels.
Does he love/like his lovers or sees them like object/trophies?
This is amazing. This is literally the inly story that I will wait for its update. Usually when I reached the end of an updating story I mostly forget about the plot and everything and will not wait for the update especially if it is slow. But this oh my, i could wait for a whole month and still know where I left off. The characters have very strong, unique, and well-executed personality and the plot is written really well. Okay i just love this. This is the sign read this nowwww
have no tag of:Returning from Another World,
that means he is no gona return home???
This novel is actually heavily inspired by the book 'The Game: Penetrating the Secret Society of Pickup Artists' by Neil Strauss (Style), im reading it currently and im like 'this is the same from the webnovel i've read before'
dammmnnn bro why u be sooooooo deep in that asscrack
I usually don't review but this time its a must. World building is one of the best ones I've seen and I'm eager to see what you have else in plan (can you spoil me a little xD).
As for grammar and writing, it's pure 5/5. Though there is a small meaningless mistake when counting his Nords and gold, but that doesn't really affect the story.
Characters are 3 dimensional but I had a hard time imagining how they look (a mistake on my end) but there's character tabs so..
As for the story, I was thinking of rating it a 4 but I rated it 5 after reading Awakened chapters because of the mystery and new antagonist.
Now, the only problem is the stability of updates. PLEASE, if you can author-san update it more frequently.
RI?
Then you should go for "Hero of Darkness" or "Birth of the demonic sword" or "Sword god in the world of magic", etc