I didn't read yet,but just from the synopsis and the 'system' - 'fast cultivation' - 'Another World'.You got my full attention...Those damn 140 characters :s
it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself /change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like ??✌️ good luck ?
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the novel is very good continue with 1 chapter a day❤❤❤❤?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
hmmmm...... I really Love this story!! It has a lot of Potential I tell ya. i Cant wait for the new characters.... i still pity the parents tho.
This novel is great until the 5th Volume started.Writing Style: 4/5The author is fluent in English, though occasionally making typos here and there. He has a good writing style, not seeming to break the immersion. My only real problem is the paragraph structure wherein paragraphs get too long.World Background: 4/5Background is great and well thought out. My only surprise is the mention of Mana reservoirs, seemingly unfitting for a life in modern society. There are also some inconsistencies in the world building here and there.Character: 3/5The characters would have been a 4/5 if not for Volume 5. Each character has their own unique personality. Though some like Noah were introduced abruptly, this was at the beginning segments. One character that was special was Luna. She was one of the genuinely interesting characters. She unlike the other girls had a genuine affinity with the MC. Unfortunately, the author decided to separate her in the name of Character Progression, which I disagree with. If not for what the author decided to make her do in Volume 4 and what was evident during Volume 5, I would have rated this a 4 or even a 5.Story: 2/5Same problems with the Characters segment. Vol 1 was consistent while Vol 2 was amazing. The ending was great. Honestly, the story could've ended there with my review on this with 4 for chara, 5 for story and even 5 for world, since inconsistencies started with Vol 4. Unfortunately, the author didn't seem to know that everything wouldn't change with 1 conversation. But it did and now the joy of reading this story is lost.All in all, I'm dropping. The story doesn't have a lot of clichés but because of that, the story gets unnatural in parts where clichés naturally occur. I hope the author learns from this review.
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Somewhat decent book, ruined by incompetent machine translation.Yes, you hear me right. MACHINE TRANSLATION!These guys aren't even fucking translator!They just throw novels into google translate and call it done!!!!!How in the **** Webnovel hired them is a complete mystery to me.
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The grammar is poor mc is poorly written things are skipped the mc goes from having issues with a mob to being able to Nike a bunch of them from 1 level up the game AI seems mental
I'm here again to explain everyone the greatness of the Heaven and the Earth *hmm I that was the line* :So a great story where mc gains a system in game evolve in various monsters (even Divine beasts) or by transmutation to from new species for his minions and for himself and h gets a lottery system where gets good skills and even Divine skills ( Ch 11 or 12).So read bro/sis so when it not in your hand you don't regret it...