It is not because he cannot think of good words to say, but rather for his anxiety. The longer he waits, the more anxious he become. After two hours waiting there is no courage left in him. He just decided to give it another day, hoping for another chance to come. Hopefully he will be ready when the time comes.
While they were discussing, Lieutenant Johan spoke up.
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"Does pretty boy Chai know about you and Jen?" (Melissa)
this always makes me laugh, especially the interaction when both our Mc and the original Mc together
Slow paced story. The system mc has is different from the usual allowing him to go into a cultivation space where he can farm and do alchemy. Overall I think it is pretty good and the rules governing it are decent as well. Mc is pretty cautious and makes pretty good choices. Now back to the fact that it is a slow paced story. Mc cultivation talent is poor even after enhancing it. Synopsis pretty misleading in that it made it sound like mc would be op but he’s not. He is good at alchemy and later he is invincible in the same small realm or a few above. Overall I enjoy the story it is pretty decently written even if translation isn’t the best.
Fire ball have small fire ball middle fire ball and huge fire ball.
kinda good but not at the sametime I don't know really???
I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.
Absolutamente apaixonada pela história e personagens! Incrível! Obrigada por disponibilizar a história completa, já que a série produzida não conta nem a metade de toda história! Obrigada!
Well, read the whole thing and I can't judge your grammar because my grammar sucks so much. LOL! Well, world background was finely established(It would be weird that the world is still not established after 44 Chapters) The characters development is a good thing too. It has a decent development that you can easily relate to. Well, the story development are finely established too. I think More arcs are coming so the story development will still improve. Overall, your story has a potential. As long as someone or even 1 is still reading, don't ever drop it! That's my only advise as a fellow author???
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