There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.
Not going to lie, it's the MC that kills this one for me. I have seen case studies on children raised by wolves and this boy is worse than that. He was raised by years by a man who taught him basic skills, but that also means he was socialized to an extent. Since the story started the MC has been in society at least virtually for 3 years, yet he is still acting like a total savage? nah, unless he actually has a mental illness or a developmental disability there is no way this dude is this clueless to human interaction. I am sure it was intended to be humorous and/or edgy, but it absolutely detracts from the story.
If your tired off all the same plot, and dumb mc that is only alive, cuz of plot armor and power up out the a** this is the story. This deserves to be a book from the original origins of the story and because it will literally blow u mind. Just love mc dosent make dumb mistake dosent hide got strength thru killing himself training day and night not sum system.
author makes the side characters who mc basically genocide their loved ones, fall in love or have romantic feelings about just cuz he's the mc
Kirk might lied about his identity, but his was a good husband. He did a great job, and the love is deep. Can Sean and Gwen get married, i think Sean will do a good job as well.
this book is amazing ,it keeps you very interested
I believe the child Sylvia is carrying is Odell's and she won't tell him because she fears that the as****le will the take the child away from her once he/she is born.
This was fantastically written. There are stories on this app that have a great plot, but are hard to read. But, this is not one of them. Very well done!
wish it didn't cost so much to read the whole book
need more updates
Yvonne or Bernice or whatever she is called deserves every bit of her punishment, I am happy justice is served How are u Lucia n how is ur health, pls don’t overexert yourself ...
i have read all the story that you have made, I love your writing skills and also your imagination is a creative. I hope one day you make a story about the friendship of amanda and Sara. I am a big fan of yours! hope that you won't get tired of writing stories because you're amazing!