The Bell Tolls

I was really enjoying this novel at the beginning. The mc was not swayed by beauty and while it is expected that love interests would come along, the way the character developed is terrible. Every female that is stronger than him plays with him like he is a toy. He has not backbone, helps women who scheme against him, and just caves in to anything females want. He forgives females pretty much instantly, while a male would get the most humiliating treatment.If you are looking to read a novel with one of the biggest simps on this platform, this is for you. Otherwise, avoid this like the plague. This review is at chapter 188.                                       

Story starts out pretty fast with our disgusting protagonist Otaku loser turning into his cultivation self. (Side note, if he has lived for thousands of years, not sure why he isn't more mature but that's whatever.) As of the latest chapters where it was revealed that he was actually in a world made by a cultivator and that (surprise surprise) the world is real and not just a game, I have kind of started to lose interest. It starts exciting with a lot of unknowns as we observe our protagonist and the world chat etc. But, we see less and less of the world chat functions, and the story feels less like what it originally was.I know that he is supposed to be 'mysterious' but part of what made this story so good was the merging of cultivation, video games, and chats. Also, the leaderboards haven't really been used well. There were many opportunities to open up more routes for characters or sects but they are brushed aside and the only reoccurring characters are the MC's waifus. Oh, and yes im angry that grandmaster turned suicidal. By the way, please please please make leaderboard characters more relevant. The only relevant one you are making is the "number 2" but since they were all sent in batches, I'm sure that the competitive spirit is fueling the top 10 players.. add some worth to them and give them a name. As for my last critique: The fact that the players were all sent in batches is kind of strange and lame. Due to the capabilities of the cultivation God or whatever I'm sure there could have been a waiting room or a time manipulation on a high level for everyone to start at the same time. idk, guess it's just so that mc seems '"cooler" that he did all this while being behind.

You know all of those hotblooded vrmmo novels that feature a hardcore protagonist that devotedly pursues the rankings? This is the slice of life version of those. The MC is pretty much just an ordinary guy doing ordinary mmo things from a noob's perspective. He joins a guild, runs dungeons with random guildies, and enjoys leveling his fishing at every opportunity. It's really kind of awesome.

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Well, read the whole thing and I can't judge your grammar because my grammar sucks so much. LOL! Well, world background was finely established(It would be weird that the world is still not established after 44 Chapters) The characters development is a good thing too. It has a decent development that you can easily relate to. Well, the story development are finely established too. I think More arcs are coming so the story development will still improve. Overall, your story has a potential. As long as someone or even 1 is still reading, don't ever drop it! That's my only advise as a fellow author???

Asami smirked. "Don't worry, I'll be getting my reward when we get there. Meanwhile, are you up for a round or two? We have two more hours to kill."