Chinese name: 史上第一密探 (First secret agent in history)Status: Finished in 382 chaptersHaven't read it, will wait for Qidian - will they pick it up, or drop it
This book is a hidden gem! Although it's not suitable for ******* readers that don't really.like complicated novels that much but for me, I really do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to simplify your point. The characters might lack some development since its slow but I can handle it. I gave it a 5 star since I really do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4 to 3-star rating! Anyways continue writing and improving. Your grammars, tenses, and vocabulary that needed proofread for your book to be more appealing!
This is the first YA romance I've met where the obvious high intelligence of the main characters is a major factor. They're not nerdy so much as they're dedicated. Their emotional involvement and development has stuttered at times, but they're turning out beautifully. They've managed to impress professors at college even before they've been admitted. They're concerned with family and doing the right things by them. They're just so stinkin' admirable, and I love it.
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Structural Improvements,it takes baby steps to reach big steps. Work on capitalizing your sentences, ie, dialogue."He stood, staring into the empty room known as the abyss room. He wondered if he could ever see the light of day after being trapped here for a century."That's a example I came up with in less than a minute, theres some mistakes but its generally what you want to aim for in your next chapters. Description and details need to also be improved upon.
The beginning wasn't that great but after the story gets really interesting. I really liked how she didn't pretend to be a nice white lotuse type or an op get everything right Mary Sue type character. She's strong but not unbelievable strong and she's not the brightest but she's not a ditz either. Some of her ideas are kinda dumb but I don't really know how old she is so she could still be in middle school which would make sense for most of the characters here and the whole body hasn't developed thing. Overall I'm really enjoying it so far! Keep up the good work!
This is the first fic I've recommended to anyone ever in the years I've been on WN. It's that good. The author has found the perfect balance between Canon, VRMMO elements and an original storyline for the MC.This isn't one of those stories where the MC is supposedly not focused on gaining a harem or fucking the female cast into mindless slaves like so many others.Its not the usual world domination, the sith bs or the wannabe jedi bs nor the usual supposedly grey Force user.This guy is just like you and I, a real person, one who uses Jedi as his class but isn't some monk or depraved idiot, this guy is like a regular gamer whose moral spectrum remains that of a regular person, one whose out for profit without it being vulgar, one who has fun without it becoming some random slice of life shtick.I'm seriously fond of the story so far. It makes you feel like you're at the forefront of a true exploration in the VRMMO world at the dawn of full emersion technology, and Disney is right there capitalising on it and pushing it with the Starwars VRMMO that we have all dreamed of as fans.Stats exist, but the game isn't entirely centric on them, nor is the story, they add to your characters capabilities, a bit like expandable perks to be build up upon in call of duty, instead of perks like last stand.Its simply awesome. I go to bed dreaming I'm in this mmo at night, in the guild with this MC. It's just really cool.
One of the few stories with good plot, characters, world.the review really is meaningless. You have to read the story to understand how above the other works on webnovel this is. A part I didn't like in the beginning was the merchant storyline. It wasn't until afterwards that I realized I was so used to reading about retribution and jealousy that I wasn't used to stories like this where the MC saw the good in people.
SYNOPSIS SHOULD BE LIKE: mo xiu is a reincarnated demon king who fights and killed his enemies after his rebirth. fight! fight! fight!cliche after cliche, and then fight! fight! fight! fight! fight! arrogant words, boastful statements and MC's beautiful and heroic entrances! one enemy dies and another one shows up again and again and again... *sigh
There is an unbelievable release rate in one day. The story is fairly interesting to those who enjoy the Kingdom Build genre, and the use of war and military genre is also fused into the story. It is a little forceful as if there is something that must be said, but the story pace is slow enough to enjoy and not too many time skips are included. Thanks for translating.
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