The novel is well written and the character development is nicly done.But what really makes this book stand out, is the creativ way the author fuses gains in knowlege of scientific principles with a rise of arcane power.
It is an excellent novel, but I believe there are some points to be improved. Most of your audience has the maturity to understand that the world is not just black and white, you don't need to have a moral advantage in every dispute. There is no need to create second-rate villains to justify the MC attitudes, we understand that human beings are complex beings, we are selfish and ambitious, we always want more, the MC enemies are people who want more for their family or people, not necessarily stupid and 'evil', I'm not defending them, they should all be killed with their families, I just ask that you don't insult my intelligence. Another point I noticed is the absence of harem etiquette, I'm not asking to go out collecting pokemons, but looking at the pragmatic side, most alliances at that time are through marriage, especially someone who wants to be emperor, accepting concubines.
Bae Seoyeon hung up and tried to think which Director Kim he was in RJ Architects. She still didn't know who made up such a prank on her that they could get an office director to play along with them.
Suddenly Alex and Pearl's eyes widened in realization "You mean….."
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Tsundere? Check.Slice of life? Check.Female master? Check.Gender equality? Trivago.This is a 5 star review. Nothing special about it. Now go and read the book.
Well I read up to chapter 25 and I can say I enjoy the story. There are some grammatical mistakes and mixed up pronouns (using he instead of she and vice-versa) which can sometimes becomes confusing and might have to reread a paragraph a few times. I like the MC, he certainly feels like a god and doesn't necessarily care about mortals besides their value as divine power generators (at least up to ch 25). He is prideful and he doesn't let himself be kicked around by others like other novel protagonists who try to keep a low profile. A suggestion that i have is that when the MC becomes too powerful and the story start to become dull because there is no conflict, you can always write povs from side characters and their struggles to achieve their lords wishes and stuff like that, or pov of the mc enemies, their struggle against a literal god. Kinda like in overlord. That novel would have been boring if it would have been just about Momonga. TL;DR This story is very enjoyable with a lot of potential. Although it has a few mistakes I had fun with it and i recommend it. Cannot wait the to see this novel take off and maybe even reach the top 10.SPOILERS AHEAD I see the author tries to add elements of romance with Anika which I don't mind if done well, but feels a bit forced with him feeling some strange attraction towards her or something, (which could be explained by him assimilating a mortal soul, or simply the hormones of the mortal body) but the author hasn't explained the attraction yet.Writing Quality 3.5/5 As i said there are some grammar mistakes here and there, and sometimes it can make the story confusing. These mistake are really important to get fixed because it can drive away new reader and can really hurt the chances of this story to take off. I might be a little harsh with this rating but sometimes it breaks the flow and immersion of the novel when Anika suddenly becomes a man. But the grammar is better than most other novels here. Story Development 4/5 There are only 25 chapters atm so I can't really say anything about it. But from what I read it's pretty nice. We are learning together with the MC about this world and it's system of power.Character Design 4/5 Well the characters are good, at least that's what i think. I like plague master.Update Stability 5/5 THIS MAN IS A BEAST 19 CHAPTERS IN A WEEK!!!World Background 5/5There are not much chapters, but i have faith in the author from what i have seen up until now.Good luck author-san, and wish you all the best to you and your novel. I will be watching your career with great interest.
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This story actually has the potential of becoming a popular read If the author could just find time to fix the grammatical errors and add more action or something along those lines.All in all, it's a good book. Already added it to my library.Looking forward to more improvement ?
The ideas and world building were top-notched. You have such a creative imagination to make a good novel like this. With more exposure, this will become big. I like the characters and the plot. Also the flow was stable, not a bumpy ride for me ? Kudos! and good job!