For now i think this novel is a good one which have the potential to be high ranked like library of heavens path. The writing is good and not annoying .It's kinda I shall seal the heavens ; or the strongest system writing in more lighter .For now in 16 chapter the story is still good and complete. The main character is serious and a good boy who not abandon his moral values .There is not harem and the story go at a good speed.
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Novel has an interesting story but the grammar is god awful and it has a generic mc who is bullied for being poor
So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!
I'm just increasing my lvl dont mind me CONFIRM the dates for this week so we have a few days of the week and we will rock 6th April Lige if we all r able we can go with you dusk if u r not able and can get a few things for me to get to work to get a job in a life that I
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Well till now the story so far has been very thrilling and yeilds to have anticipations all the time as i had ...The character must be developed to an all new height of power but he should also come to his home planet every once in a while to show off his achievements...Well, i have actually like the story so far but it has been quite a long time since they have updated any chapter of it so i actually am thinking of migrating a bit to other platforms to search for the new chapter as i really can not wait any longer and it has already been very very very very long since they have updated the chapters ...
takes years to update boy great book, mad snail is also actually really mad ????
Racist trash. Typical can do no wrong MC where even if he's the one to mess up others are punished for it. MC's country is an analogue for China and the story really suffers for it.
Love the novel and it is nice to know you read my email. ^_^The novel is a captivating one that is not based on a hero who will kill who he wants in the name of justice. Dark protagonist, a heartless enemies, choosy females, researcher artifacts and ancient ruins , a lot of twists and turns, as well as characters. Main character isn't retarded and knows when to be serious at times.I recommend this novel for everyone who is tired of dense MCs.
You know, I've read so many novels on this site but I don't think I have read one that had something to do with pure construction. So I'm waiting for this to be released.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .