This book is TOP, getting better and better. Belg4r also fixed some problems in earlier arcs, so the story flows better. It is mature, makes sense (things that happen, happen for a reason) and suspenseful. I have no idea why it has not yet "taken off" into the top 100 or even higher.
interesting story and plot background is also nice ????
Except for a few things, this is a copy of my vampire system. Huh, the plot is almost the same as well, except the cat part. Tbh if there was some changes in the plot, I wouldn’t mind reading, but it was clearly too much to ask.
This is a good novel. why did the readers think that the science in this novel fail. WTF!! This is just a fiction it's not real. Criticize the char development, plot progression, etc. not the fucking science of this novel.
Its one of the nicer fanfics but has that air of seriousness that draws you to it. There aren't enough chapters yet to be able to judge properly, but so far, I would definitely recommend it especially considering this is one of the few gamer like fanfics.For those of you that like talented and harems this story is for you, though the beginning is a bit dark.
This has a nice story and good flow it's has some small issues such as bad grammer and spelling. The biggest downsize to this novel is it's SUPERSLOW release and theirs ALOT of cliff hangers, if you hate this I wouldn't recommend this novel but if u got the time it's a decent read.
I'm loving this novel! I hope you keep writing this story for long time. I haven't enjoyed a fanfic this much in a long while. Keep up the good work!!!
One of my new favorite novels! The story is about a young man which is sucked into a new world in an accident - but all is not what it seems as there are players here and they've seemingly taken over bodies of the passengers from the accident - just wait and get mind blown as you progress further through the story till mc completes his first mission.The story has many well twists and turns and the entire plot is well thought out and planned. Stuff isnt mentioned needlessly or introduced without being used later on - also there aren't any magical moments or plot armors, where mc magically pulls something off due to good luck or due to an-extremely-convenient-item-that-wasn't-mentioned-before-that-just-happened-to-appear situation.So far the story has progressed at a good pace leaving not too much filler text or time jumping. Time jumping does happen, but it is to propel the plot line forward across stuff that is mundane and boring to read, e.g. grinding or everyday stuff. This is a feat that not many authors are good at balancing - whereas in GOR the story has prgorressed surprisingly well.The mc is thoughtful and clever, but a bit under powered. He utilises his skills in a intelligent manner. However, he is not the hyper-intelligent mc, which can predict the future and actions of other and is seemingly omniscient. He is clever in a sense that he know's when somethings is up and reacts to it in a rational way. That in itself is worth reading. The only downside to the mc is that I feel that he is leaning too much on his friends and borrowing strength from others, and not developing himself enough. This does seem to be slowly improving later on in the story as he finds a special sword.There is a good romantic sub plot which is compelling some of the mc's actions - but the entire romance "doing" is actually not that much. There are several female characters that are interested in mc, but as mc is only interested in main girl, it seems it will only be lackluster unrequited love.The side characters are all well portrayed and have very good development and each their own personalities, traits and habits which leads to interesting conversations and progression in the story. More commendable is also that these are not the box standard personality of tsunderes, air heads, etc. en masse, but characters that have their personality due to their well structured background history. Even more commendable is that the characters are ever changing due to the progression of the story - thus leading to an excellent and colorful character design.Now the world background, as this is the present world, not much needs to be said there. However the idea behind the story - that we are NPC's - leads to a thought-provoking and philosophical world and story which questions our very existence. This really well pulled off in this novel and is the main reason why this is such an enjoyable read. Translations are well done and the translator takes localisation into account ****** sure that not too much between the line are lost in translation. I can't comment on the updating stability, but I only hope that more releases are done soon and quickly as I can't get enough of this novel.Oh, a Fatty Wu has a small ***** because he doesn't update his novel regularly ? (this novel does have a good sense of self irony and humor)Tldr, If you like stiff like inception and the matrix then you'll love this. Stick with it through the first 50 chapter and you'll be hooked!
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a Really Good System Novel I will Just Stay Here And Wait for your new best chapters , PLEASE MAKE THIS NOVEL QUICK , a chapter for day please :(
Awesome story with little bit different setting than other novel which i love as well bringing new prospects. Writing quality superb like it couldn't be better. Much looking forward to this and other novel as always.
keep it up. Very entertaining story and dont drop plzzzzz. Its the only reason I am alive i.e I am alive just to read this story, just to be clear. If I dont see regular updates dont blame me for great misfortune will befall you and all your hair will start to fall and u will become bald, not even the good kind of bald just partial bald where only your top will lose hair and it probably looks ugly u know, full bald is good and all but half bald is another thing. Did you know that there are different kinds of baldness and more than 40 % of male population is bald in this world like seriously I think that in soon future everyone will become bald and like our future generation will be born bald..... now that i think about it people are born bald..... see this a premonition that we all will turn bald and return to our roots and all traces of hair will be associated with primitive people that are compared to monkeys So thats why i say that all presidents and office workers should be bald as it goes along with their image and we can separate then and know who is an office worker or an important official if u are still reading this bullshit than hats off to you man, dont you have stuff to do I mean like I am just typing bullshit to reach the word count you know... go on do something productive